Battles  Dize vs PJR

RULES

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • She told me she loved me but now I get no response, every thought yes it haunts,
  • said all she wants is, love, that's all I gave but I guess it wasn't enough, my life is tough
  • and rough but yet I stay, every day I stray further away from society, stay inside blastin
  • tunes, sleep way after noon, now I aint gonna give nobody the moon, stay tucked inside
  • my cocoon, takin heroin by the tablespoon, assume im fine but everyday I get declined,
  • i'm sleep deprived huh, i've defined gravity with these tears yuh, fallin down the stairs to
  • hell bruh, tell this world farewell but I think I'll dwell a bit longer, still slaughter my arms
  • wake up to missed alarms but no calls, smoke a blunt in the school stalls, just another
  • pair of eyeballs in the halls, drank liquor at fourteen smoked weed at thirteen, mama put
  • so much stress on me dont even know, stay up all night watchin my show till tomorrow,
  • full of sorrow besides that im hollow just another shadow, can't tell who's bro and who's foe.
  • tired of these damn hoes they expose whoever but they froze when word spread they do blows,
  • but life it goes on gazen out the windows, take another dose of valium, feelin numb in my cranium,
  • makin me feel like im made of titanium, then reality sets in gettin my attention, now I got a lot of
  • tension, pretty soon it's back to depression, hate seein my reflection, livin in a 3rd dimension,
  • lemme mention this question, what's the meaning of life, puttin a knife to my wrist waitin for blood to
  • arrive, people see then act like its a surprise, otherwise im just a nuisance

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • my mind is a like a prison i spend time in
  • no visitations apart from mr hesitation or anxiety
  • when i portray the person i try to be
  • but sometimes its hard you see cause i might be smiling
  • but uinderneath im screaming
  • this door wont open im gonna jump im leaving it all behind
  • parents probably wishing they could rewind it to a time
  • where i wasnt getting high
  • valarie xanax and mary this shit is scary
  • i be tripping when im sippin my vision is blurry
  • now im at the gp's every week
  • tryna lie about different symptoms just to see
  • if i could cop a couple sweeties to keep the demons out
  • cuase in my head they always tend shout and
  • sometimes its so intense i fall to the ground shaking convulsing
  • but if i know one thing i enjoy this life i lived
  • and to everyone who ever made me happy
  • my heart goes out to you hope you sucess and all the best //18 lines no stress :).

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