Battles  Broke_Lonely_Boy vs ZzEmpty

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just make it semi-depressing you know just vent about whatever the hell you want I don't care if you curse just make it good

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Broke_Lonely_Boy won this battle!

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Battle on August 24 2019 and Battle on December 24 2019

CHALLENGER'S RAP

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  • {HOOK}
  • I mean what can i say
  • I did everything i can
  • but in the end
  • just a growing man
  • Age 15 and
  • people think i'm too young to rap
  • well i say that's just crap
  •  
  • {VERSE 1}
  • not every rapper is in to drugs and that
  • I don't take leen
  • and i don't do weed
  • but i do do nicotine to help
  • release the pain
  • that i've been trying to disperse
  • and talk it out while trying to
  • make the pain go away
  • but i comes back every day
  • i need help and i don't speak up
  • hurting so bad i cant talk to my parents
  • about it no doubt about what i say is true
  • i'm not talking this shit then be all happy like you
  • this me way to cope thinking of how im
  • gonna go out
  • oh wait i gotta check out of life's
  • hotel my body is just here
  • and taking up oxygen
  • that's in the air
  •  
  •  
  • {VERSE 2}
  • to be honest, i been thinking of
  • popping them pills
  • trinna get a thrill
  • like runnin on the mills
  • and acting like i'm trying to get myself killed
  • and just the other day i got on nicotine
  • it's not the same as lean
  • and you can't make me stop
  • not even if you a cop
  • i'm addicted and i'm feening for them puffs
  • oh shit i'm out of luck
  • and i can barely think
  • my words i hope they linger
  • like that skin on your finger
  • i try to make these raps relatable but
  • it's like
  • my self impending doom is inevitable
  • cuz all i talk about for some reason is suicide
  • when i'm riding with my homies
  • they stopped trying to control me
  • cuz when they did
  • we all went for a nice rolling
  • I hope i did a good job
  • so i'm just gonna let the beat run on
  • have a nice day
  • count your blessing and thank god

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • //Intro
  • Fuck... I'm sorry
  • I'm just
  • It's not
  • no
  •  
  • //Chorus
  • This is a battle that's not about hate
  • It's a battle, us men will relate
  • Unless, you are perfect, but that's a debate
  •  
  • //Verse 1
  • I'd lock all the doors, but you still get through and break my heart (Oh no, baby)
  • Now, I'm in ever piece that I can be, but still being torn apart
  • Don't you remember the kisses we shared at the park
  • I don't care if you couldn't see anymore, It's so very dark
  • But every single time again, you make me put down my guard
  • And now my heart is left so very scarred
  •  
  • And I'm trying to make a song from this
  • Turn my pain into bliss..
  • Now I'm falling into the abyss
  • What will serve me justice?
  •  
  • Why are so intoxicating
  • All these fucking problems you were making
  • but, I keep falling for the spell
  • You'll welcome me to hell
  •  
  • //Bridge
  • If i'm brought through the gates of heaven
  • will it be everything I ever wanted
  • everything I hope
  • will it have no more
  • or no more of dirty lies
  • no more of the fucked up guys
  • that always seem to take your date...
  •  
  • //Chorus
  • This is a battle that's not about hate
  • It's a battle, us men will relate
  • Unless, you are perfect, but that's a debate
  •  
  • //Outro
  • I know this is an easy end
  • Everything is heaven sent
  • You fucking bitch it wasn't meant
  • TO bring you back or represent
  • another one of your fucking friends.

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