Battles  user282287296 vs Bokchoygurl

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i just started i suck so teach me sum

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • im not one to diss
  • im not one to take a piss
  • i dont need that
  • because i do it all in fact
  • aint no toping that
  • not a pussy aint no cat
  • exploring my rhymes need a map
  • traveling down my words
  • gonna take flight like a bird
  • im the one you've never heard
  • listening word for word
  • only first and second but you coming in third
  • shooting up your shot
  • my rhymes getting hot
  • you gonna flop
  • drinking my words like soda pop
  • gonna use you like a worker at a sweatshop
  • you a novelty shop
  • and im on top
  • and you over there like "i cannot"
  • move over this is my mic
  • move over man take a hike
  • dont mean to be unsportsmanlike
  • gonna be famous like hollywood
  • im gonna burn you like fire wood
  • like you dog wood
  • aint no false hood
  • laying it upront
  • kicking you out calling it a punt
  • i am the king
  • put me in the ring
  • i be serving the last punch
  • you just my past lunch
  • munch munch

DEFENDER'S RAP

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  • Am I letgo letdown?
  • What happens when I leave town?
  • never meant to let down
  • These cuts are weighing down
  • Ey, I'm the queen
  • it's easy to see
  • You can't as much survive without me
  • I'm still a little letgo letdown
  • So when he sat me down
  • And said, honey....I'm leaving
  • I was still a little letgo letdown
  • What'll happen when he leaves town?
  • Will my soul yet be found?
  • Just a lost child, now a lost soul
  • But I just wanna make love to your mind
  • They provokin' suicide but as soon as signed
  • To take all those wrongs and make them right
  • A lil' closer let me see you in the spot light
  • Other than that, I blend in the background, Bracing myself for a letdown
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  • My self-respect I leave that, in the lost and found
  • Hopefully the next album can help me out
  • this is my new album
  • Savin' up 24 bullets with gun
  • Puts that gun to his temple
  • Ha, Running rebel on another level
  • Don’t wanna have me then somebody will
  • Lock my heart up, this is jail, throw away the key
  • No distraction, just heart to heart human interaction
  • And I’m talkin, passenger action
  • And every action has an equal opposite reaction
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  • Ayo, my pen and paper cause a chain reaction
  • "Contemplate", I wrote about her
  • This be the realest shit i ever wrote
  • All this medication doesn't help shit,
  •  
  • i really need some fuckin help so give me a medication.
  • Lil to late for peaceful meditation'
  • inner medication, meditation, innovation and mental serenity
  • You showed me all the things that I thought I didn't need
  • and need psychology
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  • I'll tell you true stories, how I coldly hold heat
  • Umm, this lane is open if, if you need
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  • I know that's what u been hopin..
  • I think it's time to letgo letdown....

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