Battles QueT vs Jhatchet
RULES
heartbreak
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- You’re as beautiful as the sunset
- Open as the ocean
- I was floating in those waters till the weather froze over
- I... didn’t know I was done yet
- That sunset turned to night sky’s
- And now it’s sad to stay sober
- I... know you got a new guy but it’s fine
- You gave him a chance to dance so I’ll be waiting on mine
- You... blow my mind every time
- Get my eyes realigned, girl you shine like a dime
- In these night sky’s
- Im surprised you haven’t slowed down a bit
- Every minute with you is sparks so I don’t really get
- What’s keeping us apart
- Or why he has your heart
- Remember those late conversations that we made in my car
- You... were getting over your ex
- And you would say “what’s next”
- I should’ve spoken, I know I would’ve treated you best
- Yes, true. I’m a mess over you
- Feeling blue, shipwrecked, and I just wish that you knew
- You’re like the sunset
- There for a minute
- And when it’s finished
- I’m fine, but always upset
- ... You’re warm like the sunshine
- It’s not 2009, but I wouldn’t mind
- If our lips met for some time
- I’m... lost in thought
- My heart says we can have it all
- I caught the weather so your colors can change in the fall
- And maybe we can be together
- Challenge the task of forever
- And when it’s finished ask if we can do better
- See... it’s a pretty dream
- I hope that you can see it too
- We feel more than we seem
- And I hope we’ll be together soon
- Even if soon means a couple of moons I’ll be there
- I know all your demons there’s no reason to be scared
- You’re stare is so fair, not leaving I’ll stay
- I put my feelings on the page,
- there’s nothing else left to say
- But I love you
DEFENDER'S RAP
- one a whole nother novel
- im turning a page
- feeling sick to my stomache
- hearts broken it aches
- confused how could you do this to me
- left with suicidal thoughts
- after u ran with my best mate
- i gave my everything
- but your great at your game play
- thrown it back in my face
- the blame u kept pointing my way
- like akon im lonley
- hoping that youll just call me
- so many perfect dates we got to the stage
- were chilling comfortably but your love is fake
- suddenly changed your mind
- shouldve explained bitch can you go hang yourself
- just rang to tell you both to goto hell
- when your burning away in smoke i inhale exhale dope
- when pains emotional its like fresh cuts will heal
- realised you wernt invested in me like i was to you
- just a fool with a lesson to prove
- no thought into this heart ache track
- you burned me so damm bad
- my imagination of explaining
- my storys an exagration into pitcuring a breaking realtionship
- angels turned to satin an evil mind inside a saint went down hill
- strait away when intensions was bout the bank
- just let me say my story wriiten today is fake
- my motive is to take the lead thanks for reading my play on
- a situation
- i hope to never go through one day