Battles  QueT vs Jhatchet

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heartbreak

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • You’re as beautiful as the sunset
  • Open as the ocean
  • I was floating in those waters till the weather froze over
  • I... didn’t know I was done yet
  • That sunset turned to night sky’s
  • And now it’s sad to stay sober
  • I... know you got a new guy but it’s fine
  • You gave him a chance to dance so I’ll be waiting on mine
  • You... blow my mind every time
  • Get my eyes realigned, girl you shine like a dime
  • In these night sky’s
  • Im surprised you haven’t slowed down a bit
  • Every minute with you is sparks so I don’t really get
  • What’s keeping us apart
  • Or why he has your heart
  • Remember those late conversations that we made in my car
  • You... were getting over your ex
  • And you would say “what’s next”
  • I should’ve spoken, I know I would’ve treated you best
  • Yes, true. I’m a mess over you
  • Feeling blue, shipwrecked, and I just wish that you knew
  • You’re like the sunset
  • There for a minute
  • And when it’s finished
  • I’m fine, but always upset
  • ... You’re warm like the sunshine
  • It’s not 2009, but I wouldn’t mind
  • If our lips met for some time
  • I’m... lost in thought
  • My heart says we can have it all
  • I caught the weather so your colors can change in the fall
  • And maybe we can be together
  • Challenge the task of forever
  • And when it’s finished ask if we can do better
  • See... it’s a pretty dream
  • I hope that you can see it too
  • We feel more than we seem
  • And I hope we’ll be together soon
  • Even if soon means a couple of moons I’ll be there
  • I know all your demons there’s no reason to be scared
  • You’re stare is so fair, not leaving I’ll stay
  • I put my feelings on the page,
  • there’s nothing else left to say
  • But I love you

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • one a whole nother novel
  • im turning a page
  • feeling sick to my stomache
  • hearts broken it aches
  • confused how could you do this to me
  • left with suicidal thoughts
  • after u ran with my best mate
  • i gave my everything
  • but your great at your game play
  • thrown it back in my face
  • the blame u kept pointing my way
  • like akon im lonley
  • hoping that youll just call me
  • so many perfect dates we got to the stage
  • were chilling comfortably but your love is fake
  • suddenly changed your mind
  • shouldve explained bitch can you go hang yourself
  • just rang to tell you both to goto hell
  • when your burning away in smoke i inhale exhale dope
  • when pains emotional its like fresh cuts will heal
  • realised you wernt invested in me like i was to you
  • just a fool with a lesson to prove
  • no thought into this heart ache track
  • you burned me so damm bad
  • my imagination of explaining
  • my storys an exagration into pitcuring a breaking realtionship
  • angels turned to satin an evil mind inside a saint went down hill
  • strait away when intensions was bout the bank
  • just let me say my story wriiten today is fake
  • my motive is to take the lead thanks for reading my play on
  • a situation
  • i hope to never go through one day

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