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RULES

has to be a song that has nothing to do with disses

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Battle on March 12 2019

CHALLENGER'S RAP

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  • Listen to my rap!

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • Every once in a while, I take a chance on my ryhmes
  • trying to past all the time, trying to clear out my mind
  • of this crap ton of lies that my brain seems to try
  • to sell and it drives me to insanity by
  • telling me I might not
  • surely find, a girl who I like, and who's pure and alright
  • she will cure all my plights, of self doubt and my nights
  • where I shout and I cry it's like, I'm about to just die
  • Incomplete like a gouged eye or a mouth with no smile
  • I just frown and survive, wishing I could just drive
  • far out and clear wide of this town and by-
  • -pass all this lewd trash that continues to bash
  • at my foolish past and my how uncool I was last
  • time I tried to woo a lass
  • Alas! I am a hopeless romantic!
  • probably spent my life alone and frantic
  • because no one could ever put up with my bold antics
  • but I'll try to keep my cold rap tactics
  • and maybe I'll get my soul out of this bad abyss

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