Battles  Y-Fi vs Queen_Rapper

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • You ever get that writer's block feeling where you're stuck?
  • not really, even if i'm in a rut, a short rhyme will still hit hard as a truck
  • struck a chord with my written raps
  • that's music to the mute
  • my melodies come in poem form to be exact
  • this ain't the shit to play in the booth
  • some people make it off melancholy and with the swiftness of a magnolia farm flailing with the wind in the distance
  • no surprise my style is different, everyone has their own image
  • could be resistance, a fight against the privileged..
  • but that ain't my style, i'm middle class-
  • not a beast in a scrimmage
  • is it... weird that my shit comes and flows so vivid
  • don't get it twisted
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  • i'm super gifted when it comes to rhyming due to my commitment
  • don't expect depth in my penmanship if it's instant
  • it comes in waves and hits you on the beachfront in the distance
  • and that's twice i used distance, but i best not catch you trippin
  • the context is the same, but the picture rising is so livid
  • cause repetition comes out brilliant when it's used right in this instance
  • when familiar to previous lines, but the delivery is distant
  • i could've flipped it and said "i'll use repetition right this *minute*"
  • perhaps that delivery would've stretched out my cadence
  • the way i build these situations makes you rise your expectations
  • and rightly so, face it my patience brings out the beauty that rings to all generations
  • tell me i'm babbling nonsense you'll leave me asking questions
  • like, did you hear me right? i'm painting pictures not telling tales
  • what you looking at that way? this is plain scripture, I don't act like imma drop some veil
  • your raps smell fishy.... the type of shit i'd expect in hell
  • so don't touch me if you ain't trynna show off like you swell
  • taste some of this medicine
  • if you want more, just ring the bell
  • augh.. picture that stench
  • i'm out of lines and out of impact
  • see you when i write next rhythm to get you perplexed

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • I don't know bout all y'all people
  • //All I know is you need to be illegal//
  • You are weird// You have a crazy beard// Do you have any followers?// Bet not cuz
  • they don't like copiers// This battle is just beginning// Bet you are waiting for the ending//
  • You scared// I don't care// You crazy?// You lazy!!!// You take raps off of youtube and write
  • them like you own them// But everyone knows where you got em// This is not ending//
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  • You know I am winning// You are the loser// A regular snoozer// I don't like you// Im'ma pop
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  • up and say boo/ Halloween will be a scary one for you// Well this has come to an end//
  • Hope I win/ Have fun reading this loser// You regular snoozer

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