Battles Y-Fi vs Queen_Rapper
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- You ever get that writer's block feeling where you're stuck?
- not really, even if i'm in a rut, a short rhyme will still hit hard as a truck
- struck a chord with my written raps
- that's music to the mute
- my melodies come in poem form to be exact
- this ain't the shit to play in the booth
- some people make it off melancholy and with the swiftness of a magnolia farm flailing with the wind in the distance
- no surprise my style is different, everyone has their own image
- could be resistance, a fight against the privileged..
- but that ain't my style, i'm middle class-
- not a beast in a scrimmage
- is it... weird that my shit comes and flows so vivid
- don't get it twisted
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- i'm super gifted when it comes to rhyming due to my commitment
- don't expect depth in my penmanship if it's instant
- it comes in waves and hits you on the beachfront in the distance
- and that's twice i used distance, but i best not catch you trippin
- the context is the same, but the picture rising is so livid
- cause repetition comes out brilliant when it's used right in this instance
- when familiar to previous lines, but the delivery is distant
- i could've flipped it and said "i'll use repetition right this *minute*"
- perhaps that delivery would've stretched out my cadence
- the way i build these situations makes you rise your expectations
- and rightly so, face it my patience brings out the beauty that rings to all generations
- tell me i'm babbling nonsense you'll leave me asking questions
- like, did you hear me right? i'm painting pictures not telling tales
- what you looking at that way? this is plain scripture, I don't act like imma drop some veil
- your raps smell fishy.... the type of shit i'd expect in hell
- so don't touch me if you ain't trynna show off like you swell
- taste some of this medicine
- if you want more, just ring the bell
- augh.. picture that stench
- i'm out of lines and out of impact
- see you when i write next rhythm to get you perplexed
DEFENDER'S RAP
- I don't know bout all y'all people
- //All I know is you need to be illegal//
- You are weird// You have a crazy beard// Do you have any followers?// Bet not cuz
- they don't like copiers// This battle is just beginning// Bet you are waiting for the ending//
- You scared// I don't care// You crazy?// You lazy!!!// You take raps off of youtube and write
- them like you own them// But everyone knows where you got em// This is not ending//
- You know I am winning// You are the loser// A regular snoozer// I don't like you// Im'ma pop
- up and say boo/ Halloween will be a scary one for you// Well this has come to an end//
- Hope I win/ Have fun reading this loser// You regular snoozer