Battles  Lriss902 vs Bennytrip

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

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  • your about to witness a massacre
  • coming into this battle as the challenger
  • you bitches didnt see me coming shoulda marked your calender
  • from now on dont call me LRISS call me the examiner
  • i can tell by reading your lines that no ones a fan of ya
  • talking bout how you packing shells in your shotty
  • and that yous a black belt in karate
  • bitch no one believes your fake ass lies
  • stop pretending that yous packing nines
  • cause in reality its cold out so you stay inside
  • youve already lost this battle so you *sigh*
  • oh well at least i tried ill come back another time
  • your bars are as simple as a 6 second vine
  • my bars are magical like jesus turnin water to wine
  • you should spend more time practicing your rhymes
  • oftentimes i read peoples raps like yeah it was fine
  • nothing that stands out nothing that shines
  • just a bunch of copy cats call em mimes
  • they gotta head with no mind
  • search were you cant see deep down inside
  • look at me man to man into my eyes
  • born evil couldnt baptize
  • satan already let me in even before i arrived
  • i was beat up bruised went through hell seems like my whole life
  • the only question i could ever ask was why
  • praying to god but see he never had a reply
  • sitting in my room at night wishin id die
  • till i threw on a rap record then just sit and id vibe
  • the 2 lines above was my life at the time easy to describe
  • but then shit got worse i got colder never cried
  • the old me's gone he already died
  • better luck next time and like i said 20 lines above at least you tried

DEFENDER'S RAP

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  • Wake up in the morning after two days of sleep
  • In need of fresh bed sheets, my limits are reached
  • Turn on rhapsody starin at my dad's vintage cleats
  • I'm not a team player though, just a kid wit dre beats
  • a nay-sayer livin off dreams and hope he clings to dope and coke,
  • so I take a toke of my medicine wondering if this life's worth investin in. spurs second guessin
  • behind curtains watchin the world hurtin from a distance
  • He sings just one sentence, gleams in only his own presence,
  • only content when no one else is present, staring at resin the last in his possession
  • treasurin every moment like it's last, an outcast, left flat on his ass
  • through glasses seeing everything as it passes, the work of the jerk in a working world
  • pushed twirled and rushed no time to hurl
  • no rhyme can save this little boy or girl
  • Born non-rural in a city a comfortless accident, need no pitty
  • I make money to get by but the governments taxin it,
  • my mark starts via a vita to leave a fat dent,
  • set in store through each sore formed by this semi-auto repeater
  • Born a leader, avid mad-lib reader, you fill in the blank as I take what I rake in to the bank
  • My heart sank when my bro was shot in the streets,
  • hopin it was just a prank as I'm lost in these beats, please god help me in this time of defeat
  • I need a reason to go on so I put on a new song feelin withdrawn
  • dealin with no mom, all the pain I've undergone has shaped what you hear here in your ear
  • shed no tears, these are my fears I bear, wear, I swear I don't know where I'm at
  • It ain't fair I'm given the seat in which I sat, livin in a shiverin cold soul painted flat matte black
  • broken in pieces nothin left intact, is what I say fake fiction fact or crap
  • We've all got questions to ask, lessons to learn outside a class
  • to keep or not to repeat with this stashed bag of hash, do I move past or try an outlast
  • Just caught in the aftermath, the trash of many past middle-class drones
  • who moans and groans in a foreign place we call home, see I speak what you think just with a different tone
  • For now unknown, this verse hurts worse than any stone thrown
  • Just discovered rap like god threw me a bone, freshly uncovered
  • Stubborn hiding under the covers, this fighting and writing is what makes us brothers
  • like true lovers caught lost in the summer, 3rd degree sunburned
  • told to leave no stone unturned, what happens if I never get big and discovered
  • Fooled forced to to be ruled by pigs stuck in rainy weather
  • Whether or not my endeavors are lost forever
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  • Am I lost forever...
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  • I think I'm lost forever...

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