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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • Lost soul shivering gripping a pen
  • To scratch pasts of peddling sin
  • Previous devilish grin
  • When he sold sleep to count up the pins
  • Castaway anchor learning to swim
  • Nothings the same past guilt and blame
  • As he tries to etch a name over stains that remain
  • Preaching the meaning of pain as the pendulum swings
  • No canaries to sing
  • As the scorpions sting
  • He keeps going learning meaning he keeps growing
  • Form following function he's free throwing
  • He knows he can see storms as breeze blowing
  • Dream in hand with a pen he keeps rowing
  • Hate is the bastard child of a jealous mind
  • Seeking a purpose he refuses to find
  • So he uses his time reckless to whine
  • Why I drown in bottles of beer rather than wine
  • He's Columbus discovering potential
  • His mental the lost city of holy metal
  • I wonder is there better housing in hell
  • Wish there was someone to tell
  • But his heart remains caged in the kettle
  • In his future he's gripping a weapon
  • In the eyes of all who've given him seldom
  • Taking their peace searching for release from the streets
  • Blind to other uses for speed of his feet
  • As he runs to the beat of the sirens screech
  • Further but closer out of hopes desperate reach
  • Life is playing in repeat
  • Despite endorsements of wild horses
  • He's free to see what it means to never be free

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