Battles  Feellostinme vs JC_Goldrup

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • Plenty of rhymes sprouting out of that garden
  • Ripe, fresh, clean, and fully ready for the harvest
  • They don't belong to you but I'm sure they will pardon
  • A person as yourself who is lyrically starving
  • If the quality is good enough you could sell it at market
  • And if you mix them all together you can fill your flows up by the carton
  • You know it's not yours but maybe it could help you sharpen
  • Your own lyrical skills that might lead to stardom
  • picked up your sheers snipped all product to fill the empty spaces at the top of your margin
  • The content felt artificial but you finished what you started
  • Posted them up on display to dry out and harden
  • I shifted through the pages and discovered something alarmin
  • Everything you alleged to create had been premade and charted
  • Yet you somehow figured out how to fuck up and tarnish
  • A work of art that should have came out marvolous
  • Yet it sounded like it was plucked from the harvest by someone armless in the darkness.
  • All the tools in your possession and you still couldn't harness
  • The creative capabilities that comes from the heart of a true artist.

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • I slash through masses of intergalactic rats’ es with my mad battle tactics
  • Accurate caps make them crack like plastic
  • The action gets drastic, no way you outlast this
  • When I load my gun, no way you can out past this
  • Need no bullets, use my gun butt to whack shit
  • Or alien weapons: my plasma burns like acid
  • Hey you? Your stupid ass’es just crash it
  • Try to run me down, I got my rockets just to blast shit
  • Now look what you got: two headshots from this bitch
  • Faster than the time you were hit in your dick
  • Your weapons may be bigger, but my blue grenades are stickers
  • 25-0? Your ass got bounced like Tigger.

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