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Make a Remix of Eminem's When im gone and then Battle me and you must use an instrumental of the song
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- Im gone for the break of dawn
- They took everything i can barely wake up
- i can not even be Friendly every word stings
- And it seems to bring more shouting
- and me to start counting the days
- That leave me in a haze and a emotionless haze
- A daily Struggle in the Concrete Jungle Till i die
- and end the morphine supply i cant lie
- I hope to live before i realize my lies fill the room like flies
- I kick dust up but i must keep my dream alive
- These rappers want me dead in my sleep
- And full of lead nothing Matters i wrote my last chapter
- Feel no pain the chain has come back
- im not a maniac let it go
- I hope to jet outta here possibly disappear
- Off this rap frontier i steer away for a career
- it does get better let them send letters
- after years of Suicide i provide the glock
- i stare at the clock will anyone on my block
- remember me a member fuck it they never
- cared about me imma free tonight i recite my letter
- put on my best sweater sever open the locks
- and take break the windows with rocks
- tonight i take my life right past midnight
- When imma Dead and gone
- Right past dawn one shot brain full of lead
- My bloods spread imma dead and gone
- a White swan no icon lifes like a python
- Restricting and leaving you choking
- When imma Dead and gone rejoice
- Remember my voice it was my choice
- Dead and gone i poise over the noise
- it gets better i cant remember the last
- person in the past that asked hows my day
- they stay away the never try to understand me
- I never made a stand i stood in the shade
- Slip my Gloves on this i what i love
- giving them shove i rose above hate
- they took my scraps off my plate
- I overlook the details i fight tooth and nail
- But tonight i lose that along with the chat
- Fuck that hell the gutter thats my butter
- you feel my pain i maintain a strong face i cant complain
- the fans i get i owe them a large debt
- instead i take another pill refill my bottle yeah
- I hit the throttle i will miss this place
- i embrace the grace the disgrace and leave my trace on life
- When imma Dead and gone
- Right past dawn one shot brain full of lead
- My bloods spread imma dead and gone
- a White swan no icon lifes like a python
- Restricting and leaving you choking
- When imma Dead and gone rejoice
- Remember my voice it was my choice
- Dead and gone i poise over the noise
- The decoys are my voice i have a choice to live
- but i dive into not surviving i start driving to the last stop
- i flop outta the car hitting the ground
- i look around no one here but me
- i grab the gun the sudden vision its my last decision
DEFENDER'S RAP
- I hide behind this pen and paper I write on
- Depression and anger when I release my lyrics on many songs
- I doubt she would miss me when I'm gone all alone
- Isolated from the world tryna hide my pain
- Tryna hide away I'm prolly gonna die today
- Look at the monster I made
- A painted reflection of hate
- Fuck my mental state if you don't deal with this shit bitch you can't relate
- Locked away tryna find my motivation to get up out of bed really wish I was dead
- I'm not okay sitting here praying that my paranoia would go away
- I took my pain and cherished it that's the only thing that helps me feel okay
- Cause what you say really cuts deep
- Depression on my mind insomnia man I can't sleep
- Open up my hollow mind and you'll see my demons creep take a peek
- Nowhere to go no home or a family tree
- The fruit is rotten unlock me from my chains and let me be