Battles AwokenGenius vs Aspect
RULES
The rules are that you have to write your song about a girl that's hurt you, or girls. Or if you're a girl write it about a boy
Max of 20 lines
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- I just woke up, bad start to the day last night me and my girl broke up,
- Same story as the last girl, i ain't surprised about it, cause its just my luck,
- Maybe i should change my attitude, them girls i shouldn't have pursued,
- Cause they showed me no gratitude, now i'm just living like a loner, in solitude,
- They do something to make you doubt them, lie then they get on the defensive,
- Their untrustworthy, the last line of defense start coming at you on the offensive,
- Claiming that you never gave them a chance, but you was fooled at the first glance,
- By some beautiful Siren, singing her song, having your arse trapped in a trance,
- You couldn't read her like a book, you was too busy believing her, innocent look
- Till you became her victim, fucking you over like some belligerent crook,
- She used to be shy and sweet, didn't talk much all you got most days was silence,
- Get close saw her true colours, shes violent and mental like patients in asylums,
- So many times she lied and some sick plans behind your back she devised,
- Well we've all been there i suppose, that's how the naive becomes wise,
- Us guys all get called 'the same' we get tarnished with the same brush,
- Well all the girls i met are fake like a #Card-board cut out, my ex got a royal flush,
- Cause she was deceitful, i was hooked on her like an addict to a needle,
- She was committing sins of Lust, swear to god that this shit shouldn't be legal,,
- She betrayed me and played me, i was blind so many times that she cheated,
- So now i give up hope on a decent relationship, i'm drained, my energies depleted,
DEFENDER'S RAP
- //(00:45)
- I spent 8 months with this girl,
- And she changed my world,
- But change aint always good,
- I was taller but i felt under hood,
- When i had the chance to leave i thought i should,
- But break your heart, i never could,
- I used to fight for you,Stay up all night for you,
- But the vibes proved, You liked some other dude,
- And when my best friend was around through your eyes,
- I wasent even recognized, But i realized it was time for byes,
- You see i was mad that you cheated,
- And people looked at you like you were the one beated,
- There goes 8 months, Bye, Deleted,
- Fuck this shit i dont need it,
- And my feelings, Fuck you , Beat it!
- I cant believe you took my heart just to feed it,
- With you, I sank my deepest,
- And now im climbing up my steepest,
- And when you read this, I hope your at your weakest,