Battles 310Metaz vs LVL
RULES
Make a rap based on suicide.
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- (Intro)
- Tell everyone I'm sorry for everything.
- A mistake is going away.
- All my pain is gone, now.
- This is note.
- (Verse 1)
- Dear, Mama, Papa,
- Tell my family I love you all.
- I committed suicide so I left this note.
- And I'm laying on the floor, bleeding my wrist.
- I hope my enemies get this letter, I hope it brings them bliss.
- So fuck it, a goodbye a due.
- I'm getting sick of this, all the pain in my life, so I'm saying goodbye.
- And I wrote this letter before my suicide, when I cut my wrist with my fuckin knife.
- Don't go into my room, you won't like it.
- Tell Uncle Brendon, Cici, Ame, and all the others I'll miss them.
- And tell my family, that when I'm going to hell, I'll rejoice.
- Just remember all the good times.
- Give them flowers, and hours, to mourn all night.
- Take me as an example to the suicide, to make it until people that words hurt!
- Tell the Rappers, I wrote this a wake up call!
- Stand up, and fight for the kids.
- Stop fighting and stop biting, causing suicides by the minute!
- 15 suicides in a minute, isn't enough is it?
- You'll find my knife on my desk, where I bled out.
- Hanging three times didn't work out, so I'm using my knife this time.
- Take this a goodbye, and you'll be alright.
- Just remember all the good times.
- (Hook)
- Don't worry, you'll be fine.
- It's alright, just rejoice.
- Don't be sad, that I took my life.
- It's alright, just rest me down, like a kite.
- (Verse 2)
- I don't wanna goodbye again, last time I failed life again.
- Three times hanging by the rope, by my ceiling fan.
- Don't make me take my life again, when you bullied me and then came to my funeral.
- Like, "that's what I did to him."
- Now you regretting it, calling me a fucking faggot, when I kissed him.
- Is this what it took for you to realize, what you say matters?
- Hope you read my note, hope it really makes you think.
- I'm seeing black now, and I'm bleeding out.
- I don't see the light, guess that means I'm going to hell.
- Tell Quincy, I love him, and I'm sorry.
- I didn't want to cause the pain, but it was my time.
- I was depressed as fuck, but I only got a minute, so tell everyone I'm sorry.
- For everything I've done, I've caused so much pain, and karma comes back and bites me.
- Guess it's time, so goodbye.
- (Hook)
DEFENDER'S RAP
- So cruelly was my small moment of joy snatched away,
- So quickly and swiftly I didn't even have a say.
- I throw myself in whiskey til I drink past the day,
- Down the bottles, I drown my sorrows, it's best to move aside.
- Out of dollars, don't trust the doctors, they say never suicide.
- But I slipped into depression like it was a snowy drive,
- I kicked and wept and turned my eyes to the holy sky.
- But nothing, and I know I mustn't,
- But death is what for I'm lusting.
- At the age of seventeen, I found the recipe.
- L S D, ecstasy, all sorts of specialties,
- My remedies, they and I had that chemistry.
- Acid had me blasted, weed had the numbing seed.
- My very mama told me not to do the marijuana,
- But it was nirvana and so I told my mother nada.
- And my papa was all about disowning me for Cara.
- Cara, who grounded me and astounded me, dumbfounded me,
- Loved me, held me, kissed me and never dismissed me,
- Took the pain away, brought a tentative blossom of hope,
- And that shit was ripped away, and then I lost it to coke.
- She left me, and cocaine began to help me.
- And down I went, drinking and sniffing the rest,
- Taking pills and more that was killing myself.
- My sister thought I was dying, or so everybody told her.
- As if I didn't realize, as if it wasn't something I hoped for.