Battles  nigel_sinatra vs Fratricide

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • Time to make a change with everything it takes,
  • Wish my scars would wash away like crying in the rain,
  • Eventually my everlasting essence rises to the gates
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  • Need someone to relate but even love's full of hate
  • It's like fine wine needs time for wonderful taste
  • Maybe it's fate or all mistake wait it's hard to sustain,
  • In lanes lacking drive and wasn't given no breaks,,
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  • Until my carcass decays and I get tossed in grave,
  • Etching rhymes like hieroglyphs into my coffin today,
  • So God pardon my ways cuz we been tossed in a maze,
  • An artificial matrix made for marketing brains,,
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  • Even the hardest of days would never alter my faith,
  • I'm writing bars to remain and never targeting fame,
  • See I just want to get my family up and out of this place,
  • Working on the bigger picture as the record replays

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • imagine if the world was removed from color and power
  • everything was gray and we were removed from brainpower
  • hope would start fading nothing is fascinating
  • and all of our feelings are hidden like they are covered paintings
  • names mean nothing you die we get a new one
  • cant understand fear so play war just for fun
  • some are called the giver the one who holds life
  • others who cant feel the pain of being stabbed by a knife
  • everyone has forced jobs that the utopia feels that its your destiny
  • when really they are just holding you back from the pain called reality
  • weak religion overshadowed by old beginnings
  • just like old saying death means to move on and replace the missing
  • you try to leave and you try to fight to take control and hold on to your might
  • nothing will change in this world with no light even if u overthrow the leader and its acolyte
  • lying gets you nowhere get hurt take pills they wont care to even notice
  • its hopeless to sit and focus or try to take command like Moses
  • so now you try to run after you learned all the pain
  • cant take pills the hurt wont go away
  • even if you are tired and you feel like you arent living
  • you still cant hide your feelings like covered paintings

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