Battles Hutch vs JayFlow
RULES
Make it depressingish, 12 bars only, and talk about your future with rapping
Max of 13 lines
THIS BATTLE IS OVER
JayFlow won this battle!
2 ROUNDS
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Battle on July 12 2014
CHALLENGER'S RAP
- *Long gasp*
- I wake up from a crazy dream I had,
- It feels like it represented my entire life I have ahead of me,
- Representing everything that's bound to happen to me,
- And honestly, I'd prefer drowning than this ending,
- A causality, see what happened is I chased my dreams,
- But was never able to succeed, so I lived in poverty,
- Thoughts of suicide hourly, hourly,
- People including myself only ever had doubt in me,
- See the scary thing is that there is a great chance in this happening,
- The crazy thing to do was to chase these dreams irresponsibly,
- Now I'm stuck with this, just cause I wanted popularity,
- I hate myself for thinking that rapping was a possibility,
DEFENDER'S RAP
- my life is a highlight from the darkness in which i rise from
- the insight from my pain remains the same, i am blind from
- the truth, what to do, my friend was murdered, no words can sum
- up to the emotions i have devoted to overcome, everything gone, ransom
- is the only way to get my two sense to escape this truth and i am fighting
- i pray that one day i can be with my dead homie, show me, i am trying
- to regain hope, i remain broke, i choke, even to speak, this isn't fair
- i stare through the clues that call my future, it's a crueler despair
- i could of been dead too, these bent clues ruin what i adapt to
- i rap to, build my own honor, i devote myself to doctor my pass through
- these misery scenes, hittin me, please, help me, god i need you
- i see through the devil, and this pencil seems to read through
- my misery, i skip these scenes, but it's a mystery i can't beat through