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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • She is working two jobs
  • Barely enough to raise her child
  • Unpaid bill piled up on her counter
  • She never worked so hard
  • Suffocating slowly
  • But something is keeping her lonely
  • She says I gotta move on
  • It's been 5 months since you spoke to your son
  • I can't bare to lose any more
  • I need help the type u cant provide
  • I'm tired of telling the kids lies on where you've been
  • My heart is bleeding right now he is only a kid
  • Starting to forget his father face
  • No goodnight stories or kisses
  • Just a look of neglect
  • Its only time till a blade is deep in his wrist

DEFENDER'S RAP

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  • Verse 1: the one legit
  • why the fuck could you ever leave me for another man
  • like i'm not worth a damn minute of your time, until
  • i name you on a rhyme so i have my powerful friend
  • you always treated me like i'm pretend, but in the end,
  • i'm karma because i'm coming right back at ya, with a letter,
  • to tell you, i'm better off without you, so as you cry over the thought
  • of losing me, you sob over every other reason that i left you
  • because it wasn't even me it's always you, what you made me do,
  • what you put me through, fucking bitch i'll throw your demented
  • corpse in a ditch, if you ever cheat on me again, so i cuss you out
  • until the very end, like you hit me, because i don't hit a girl,
  • i just hurl over the very thought of her, now i'm a better rapper
  • now i have fresh air to breathe, i'm a loose leaf, your as disgusting as
  • a queef. so my final setence as i spit legit shit as intense as this is,
  • it's special while it lasts, your burying my emotions like i'm hiding behind
  • a mask, i just have to ask, I laughed while you wept, how's it feel now?
  • Yeah, funny, ain't it? You neglected me
  • Did me a favor, though, my spirit free you've set
  • But a special place for you in my heart I have kept
  • It's unfortunate, ain't it?
  • Hook: The One Legit x2
  • so as you say you aren't gonna hurt me today, that was your last lie
  • now, i'm going away, run away into, a song...against you.
  • Verse 2: BELLVADEAR
  • I gave you my heart and you gave me back pieces stab'd
  • and jab'd me as my heartbreak increases
  • left me questioning what I did wrong while you
  • effortlessly said so long
  • caught a glimpse of a chrystal ball and in a second
  • it shattered against the wall
  • about to post traumatically stress this disorder
  • next thing you'll see is cops and reporters
  • to bad I love you enough to watch you live
  • cuz even though you take and take I just give and give
  • baby why you crying when I'm the one hurt
  • by you so why you cause all this drama we gotta get through
  • I remember the times it was us against everyone now I
  • get burned by revolving my world while you held the gun
  • behind your back so you could sneak behind mine and
  • stab me with both of your two faced sides
  • did you tell them the same things you sold to me how
  • we are special and so meant to be
  • next pitch please
  • I won't ever trust another I see how this plays and
  • I don't want no parts of these unloyal ways
  • truth and honesty you just can't deliver so here's a cold
  • shoulder hope it makes you shiver
  • have fun with your quick wits hope they are everything
  • I'm not and I hope you realize I was the best you coulda got
  • but you chose to be unfaithful when that's all I had faith in
  • us forever now it's to late so sad
  • no crying to me when you get tired of the
  • fake life I'll be fine alone just me and my steak knife
  • block you outta my mind like you did when you cheated
  • hope you get the same treatment I was treated
  • Hook: The One Legit x2
  • so as you say you aren't gonna hurt me today, that was your last lie
  • now, i'm going away, run away into, a song...against you.

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