Battles EliteEllie vs
RULES
*Cursing is allowed *Write about someone's life yours or others
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- She is working two jobs
- Barely enough to raise her child
- Unpaid bill piled up on her counter
- She never worked so hard
- Suffocating slowly
- But something is keeping her lonely
- She says I gotta move on
- It's been 5 months since you spoke to your son
- I can't bare to lose any more
- I need help the type u cant provide
- I'm tired of telling the kids lies on where you've been
- My heart is bleeding right now he is only a kid
- Starting to forget his father face
- No goodnight stories or kisses
- Just a look of neglect
- Its only time till a blade is deep in his wrist
DEFENDER'S RAP
- Verse 1: the one legit
- why the fuck could you ever leave me for another man
- like i'm not worth a damn minute of your time, until
- i name you on a rhyme so i have my powerful friend
- you always treated me like i'm pretend, but in the end,
- i'm karma because i'm coming right back at ya, with a letter,
- to tell you, i'm better off without you, so as you cry over the thought
- of losing me, you sob over every other reason that i left you
- because it wasn't even me it's always you, what you made me do,
- what you put me through, fucking bitch i'll throw your demented
- corpse in a ditch, if you ever cheat on me again, so i cuss you out
- until the very end, like you hit me, because i don't hit a girl,
- i just hurl over the very thought of her, now i'm a better rapper
- now i have fresh air to breathe, i'm a loose leaf, your as disgusting as
- a queef. so my final setence as i spit legit shit as intense as this is,
- it's special while it lasts, your burying my emotions like i'm hiding behind
- a mask, i just have to ask, I laughed while you wept, how's it feel now?
- Yeah, funny, ain't it? You neglected me
- Did me a favor, though, my spirit free you've set
- But a special place for you in my heart I have kept
- It's unfortunate, ain't it?
- Hook: The One Legit x2
- so as you say you aren't gonna hurt me today, that was your last lie
- now, i'm going away, run away into, a song...against you.
- Verse 2: BELLVADEAR
- I gave you my heart and you gave me back pieces stab'd
- and jab'd me as my heartbreak increases
- left me questioning what I did wrong while you
- effortlessly said so long
- caught a glimpse of a chrystal ball and in a second
- it shattered against the wall
- about to post traumatically stress this disorder
- next thing you'll see is cops and reporters
- to bad I love you enough to watch you live
- cuz even though you take and take I just give and give
- baby why you crying when I'm the one hurt
- by you so why you cause all this drama we gotta get through
- I remember the times it was us against everyone now I
- get burned by revolving my world while you held the gun
- behind your back so you could sneak behind mine and
- stab me with both of your two faced sides
- did you tell them the same things you sold to me how
- we are special and so meant to be
- next pitch please
- I won't ever trust another I see how this plays and
- I don't want no parts of these unloyal ways
- truth and honesty you just can't deliver so here's a cold
- shoulder hope it makes you shiver
- have fun with your quick wits hope they are everything
- I'm not and I hope you realize I was the best you coulda got
- but you chose to be unfaithful when that's all I had faith in
- us forever now it's to late so sad
- no crying to me when you get tired of the
- fake life I'll be fine alone just me and my steak knife
- block you outta my mind like you did when you cheated
- hope you get the same treatment I was treated
- Hook: The One Legit x2
- so as you say you aren't gonna hurt me today, that was your last lie
- now, i'm going away, run away into, a song...against you.