Battles  BELLVADEAR vs Killahflames9

RULES

Write about life for you this year.

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • I wanna be healthier this year so I can donate blood and organs
  • I wanna be louder so people can hear my ideas and voices
  • I wanna eat better and not take as much sugar, eat more salt and maybe I'll feel...good'r
  • maybe actually follow through with plans and less spontaneous
  • try to tune out others emotions cuz it's a pain in my uranius
  • I'd wish for more steady sleep pattern but I've adjust to the irregularity
  • but if the sandbags get to heavy someone better help take care a me
  • ha, may just start to sleepwalk right outta this notebook zombies like half these dead brained folks look
  • I wanna smile at everyone to see them smile back, maybe they are muted, sign language is a common act
  • gestures to others in mutual respect, but those who disrespect, I'll handle that without regret
  • I feel so much this year esp. those who are far less fortunate
  • ya never know the houses they built, so why ya wanna go and torch it
  • so many shifting gears like some Grand Theft Auto, mind set on cruise control my pen's gas'n and mash'n through outposts
  • rev'n it up in acceleration those come'n to destroy the light in the eyes of the kids who need joy
  • setting up props no, setting a stage where they can all see a true example to display
  • no more cursewords just occasional slips off the tongue, save it for a diss track, dessert for the scum
  • finances eh..I really dislike math, just save it in the bank, I'm far to tired after class
  • besides shopping is such a waste of energy work to spend it on what, over analyzing penny pinching
  • control micro management down to every dime, every little second time and cash flow on their minds, not mine.
  • spend all that time detailing every tiny detail, everything around you just passes by peace out and farewell
  • time still ticking better live it down, I don't live it up, cuz I remain calm on my grounds
  • level head'd well that is still debate-able, but every emotion I speak on, I reach someone that's relate-able
  • cuz I am capable of capturing minds with insights that are life change-able, Earth is save-able
  • so I don't need advice on what I could should or would do if I were you
  • we all posses the same hardware it's all about the tools you use

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • My name savage smith and imma bout to drop some bars u ready u told me to rap love sorry pez i
  • Cant hear u my bars r above were im from listen its ruff to me ur just a stupid puff im gonna huff
  • And puff everytime i rap battle i win it could be her or him or mybe the full family im on a
  • Spending spree while u get ur clothes for free im already at the top of the family tree this is all
  • About me mom u will see when i was a baby i wasn't allowed to see my daddy his name was danny i
  • Grew up in an alley way ye i might stay with my mom away from my dad in a flat i was sad and even
  • More mad so listen lad u read this u must be glad might i add i right all this down in ur moms
  • Notepad i might be bad and rad at times im the ome with the six pack this is a comback im gonna
  • Attack bro im back ur bars are weak ur a pip squeak

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