Battles JSlick vs Storme_Music
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Rap about a troubled youth.
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Battle on March 24 2018
CHALLENGER'S RAP
- Girl named lucy
- Highschools new freak
- In her mind unruly,
- Tryin find herself who she,
- Lost in in the bullshit
- Adolecent with no future
- Like her moms won't do shit,
- So she grows into a nusience
- Her Daddy wasn't present
- He was out there pushin,
- Cocain to the residents,
- No presents for his two kids.
- He Never learned his lesson,
- Six feet unders where it took him.
- Now lucy's mom is stressin,
- Lucy's movin in with new friends.
- 20 years her freshmen
- Now Shes fuckin with this new man.
- He's got her doin extacy
- So she can cope with losing,
- Out on childhood dreams,
- Lucy's a fiend and shes cruisin.
- (Hook)
- Troubled soul baby,
- just Stuck in cycle
- that rotates daily
- And swallows lives whole,
- That's a bold ass statement,
- Cause if it's got ahold,
- Take them chains and break um,
- Paths never set in stone
- Girl named lucy
- Movin on to new things,
- Pregnent with a child,
- But she's not sure who it's
- baby daddy is, been on a binge
- for about two weeks,
- Sex, drugs and alcohol
- A product of this new age,
- Thats lucys excuse
- When confronted with this new phase,
- Of life, she won't get by
- So she turns to prostitution,
- 3 months pregnant,
- Momma asks how can you do this?
- Lucy fires back,
- You and daddy taught it to me.
- Girl named lucy,
- She gave birth to Sussie,
- Named her after momma
- Felt bad,
- never tied up loose ends
- Her Momma passed away before the baby came
- into this, world, now she'll never see
- her product of fruitions
- Lucy's doin better but she's haunted by these visions
- Of seeing sussie grow up the same way that she did,
- Never know her daddy and her momma was a basehead,
- Never have no body so she'll turn to make some fake friends,
- Then she'll turn to drugs, sex and alcohol to make ends
- Meet, live on the street, never eat, just have relations,
- Cycle continues, sussie has a bastard baby,
- Lucys biggest obstacle in life has been created
- (Hook)
DEFENDER'S RAP
- He is going to school, with $20 dollars in his pocket, Hoping he has
- enough money to cop it, he's selling it for more, trying to make a profit,
- he goes to the washroom, coughing up blood, mucus, and vomit, he's
- addicted, there's no way he can stop it, poking, snorting and popping,
- his blood pressure gets higher, and his mental state is dropping,
- he goes home and grabs a gun, thinking if he should off him.
- Yeah, his home life is bad, he living with his mom cuz he ain't got no dad,
- instead of feeling sad, he turns his pain in to anger, and he is getting
- so mad, his mom yells, and makes him feel bad, she says "You're a
- mistake that I never wished I had!" so he reverts to his pen and his pad,
- He steals some money from his moms purse, hoping he can get a grab.
- He is popping pills and smoking weed, he be hating his mom, so he
- be hanging out in the streets, He is becoming a motherfucking
- drug fiend, he be seeing all of this and he is only fifteen, all that shit can't
- be unseen, his damn youth is something he can't redeem.
- He be getting into fights and acting all tough, he acting like he got a
- good life, when really it is fucked, he be hating all the people who ever
- showed him love, he always picked death if things were push or shove.
- He be killing motherfuckers who would get up in his face, he almost took
- his own life, but it was luck, maybe right time, wrong place, he be getting
- high just to fade, he be questioning his own life, questioning his faith,
- he ain't got no love, but he got tons of hate.
- he be smoking and getting high, to get his way, he doesn't care if he lies,
- doesn't care if he dies, he always just does, he never asks why, he
- no longer has faith, he don't care where he flies, he hates his mother,
- he loves when she cries, he be poking the needle, trying to waste time.
- He says its fuck what you say, he gets so high, he is up and away, he be
- leaving home, he'll be back in a couple of days, he be selling coke, trying
- to get his pay.
- *This was made in 5 mins, its kind of shitty.. didn't really try with it, lol.*