Battles  Talapino vs TaStheGreatest

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • man I never felt like this,
  • This pain just wouldn't go away,
  • I woke up debating suicide almost everyday,
  • So I had some pills and layed them out in a row,
  • Took one by one it was finally time to go,
  • i hope to be dead by tomorrow
  • So I sent the same sorry text to everyone I know,
  • Even though most of them left me long ago.
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  • But just as my eyes begin to close,
  • My moms phone rings and it's strange cause she don't suspect a thing,
  • It's only her that cared that night,
  • In tears she told me I can win this fight,
  • But now everytime I fuck something up I don't think twice
  • fuck life
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  • And it's weird ain't it?
  • How the mirror image changes
  • when you hate it,
  • And the extents we go to just to change it,
  • Was only young when I stole those codeine pills,
  • got addicted to it couldnt stop could not quit
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  • I wish i was never like this,
  • i wish i was the person i was going to be.....
  • the darkness threw me into a cage,
  • locked it, threw away the key
  • have so much anger and rage,
  • nobody i know , knows, what its like to be me,
  • as i write this, im so alone, that the soul inside of me, Starts to freeze
  • i hate the sound of my lungs make when i breathe!
  • But i love the feeling when the wound starts to bleed
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  • And you say it'll be okay,
  • But come on I know that's just what you say
  • when you got nothing else to say,
  • But yeah let's just pretend it'll be okay

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • Talapino?/
  • I can tell you already whack, it's a wrap, burrito/
  • Come take this blast amigo/
  • You probably try to act more hardcore than four swords wielded by that jackass Steve- O/
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  • If you claim you a giant/
  • I got smooth stones ill be supplying/
  • Get it David and Goliath/
  • You not a cool cat please stop lion/
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  • But me? I'm an abomination/
  • I predominately mastered psychology to dominate the nation/
  • You run in place just face it/
  • You know you second you've grown complacent/
  • Heard of an ass whooping? Don't make me give a demonstration/
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  • Ill use any tools to duel this dude/
  • Im cool I spew the fuel to brew you fool/
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  • You concoct the nonsense/
  • I drop the bombs quick/
  • Like Osama ringing the alarm on the pentagon its gone bitch/
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  • Im so murderous/
  • They've never heard of this/
  • Show em where the furnace is/
  • Ill smelt him into a weak shield its curtains man/
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  • Cuz he's taking blows and is about to crack under pressure/
  • Im at ya throat like chloraseptic I can't get any Phresher/
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  • Im a predator you're my prey so pray to god/
  • I detonate like a bomb like praise Allah/
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  • I'll take a grenade smash it into your face/
  • I'll grab a blade slash through your ribcage/
  • I bring the pain I'm so insane/
  • I break the chains like Phoenix rising up out the flames/
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  • Sike naw im not violent or a tyrant/
  • Just an ill lyricist that's a bit defiant/

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