Battles  user334187465 vs Deadslim

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • Awake to face the noon day dawn
  • like a loving doe or that in a fawn
  • we all want to belong
  • I exist as a vapor then I am no more...
  • And then clouds form
  • when the invisible vapours
  • in the air,
  • condenses into visible droplets...
  • And thus the cycle continues...
  • sprinkled with a bit of care
  • the love to behold a new day's sun

DEFENDER'S RAP

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  • can't keep a bitch cause i'm greedy,
  • can't keep a bitch cause i'm needy,
  • can't keep a bitch cause i live freely,
  • can't keep a bitch, but these bitches need me,
  • got these hoe's on my dick,
  • but i don't wanna steal nigga's shit,
  • she want me to lick her clit,
  • throw that hoe in a ditch,
  • but enough about bitches,
  • and enough about ditches,
  • let's talk about riches,
  • i can't get none cause i'm stuck doing dishes,
  • eat only the main edibles,
  • going through so many struggles,
  • going through so many troubles,
  • stranger to money,
  • because i don't work for a company,
  • and i'm sitting here hungry,
  • writing poetry, constantly,
  • honestly, my last hope is dope,
  • or this rap shit but i always choke,
  • people take me as a joke,
  • cause i'm broke, and i will be until i croak.

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