Battles FreshGoat vs logic
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Battle on June 16 2014
CHALLENGER'S RAP
- I'll be honest, I'm pretty sore about you beating me; but I don't think you know why
- your rhymes are pitiful, I'm not sure if you paid someone or threatened them
- you wrote like this, nothing rhyming or flowing
- then you put 2 words together in a sentence so they'd "rhyme in time"
- then write another sentence
- WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK? when did this become rap? to just type out a novel
- any kid off the street can do that, seriously Google it
- "Thirteen-year-old author writes own story" I'm assuming that's you
- if you can honestly win a battle just by writing then I don't want to win
- that means you've given up quality, given up history, stopped giving homage to rap
- regardless of what other people do, I'LL keep it real
- punchlines, flow, rhymes, syllables, diss', and respect
- but I can't respect a man who can't respect his own rap,
- I'm not sure how this will go, since this isn't a rap it's a short story I may win
- probly not though, I assume your a better author, and I'm a better rapper
DEFENDER'S RAP
- Street novels your right I live em I write em you jus read em an bite em
- Then get mad kus it don't sound right wen you recite em kus your unlike him
- You ain't real obviously your a bitch in disguise I'm the shit see the flies
- I see the tears in your eyes an hear the jealousy in your crys these lies
- Wen I was 13 I was in the kitchen baking pies serving feinds do or die
- Strugglin to survive hiding drugs in the bushes gun on my side
- Aint lettin shit slide my heart an my pride all I gots my balls an my word
- Your response was absurd I shit on mufuckers you jus drop turds
- You didn't even rhyme for me sounded like a entry in your diary
- Here's a shoulder go ahead an cry on me its better than tryna lie on me
- I'm jus a product of my environment result of poor society
- Teacher told me I wouldn't b shit an people wouldn't hire me
- Blasphemy but inspired me to get money like I had the recipe
- Cooking up hot lines my specialty you lack integrity
- You can b the better rapper that's something I never claimed to b
- A rapper is a liar an I'm not suprised at all that's what you aim to b
- I change history make art with my delivery you.. You sit down to pee
- Jus a Lil girl to me burn you to a fricassee honestly why you mention me?
- I am what you pretend to b smoking pcp thinking you offended me
- G.o.a.t is greatest of all time an that's what I intend to b
- You owe me homage mufucker I've already paid my fees
- To new Jersey Trenton state penitentiary ask about me