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BYOB: Invasion - Ill Wordz VS Off Track 2 Minutes Voting for 2 Days. Lets Get It.
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- I won't need much wordplay for this cuz you should know that I don't play around
- You actin mad extra like a boy screaming during his Paper route
- You see i'm Mexican, I bring more flavor even when i'm cheesy
- I got a case-of-dillas, so you really couldn’t ever BEAT ME
- Ive done this since the old heads were young cats, ive seen the litter
- You checked into my old threads, facebook, probably twitter
- You’re untalented, suspect and seem troubled, son!
- You should NEVER have to stalk a man just so you could battle ‘em!!!!!!
- Im workin on a lot of things, lookin at what I can Fix up
- I got pieces in my life, but you’ve never even had one to pick up!
- I know you probably heard my tracks; you were left impressed
- When i heard some of your songs? they left me super depressed!!
- You’re maad emotional and your tones were waaaay off
- If your music was a knife, im askin why you tryin to take the blade off?!?
- You’re barely on tracks, Your name is honest…just by the look of it
- But You never had to lie for me to know that you’re full of it
- Youre the type to rap once and say "I'm turning into Pac"
- Then you record your first song and it sounds like alternative rock
- Its evident you copped your style from Staind, simple facts
- You aint spillin much tea even if all you spit was fickle raps
- You claim to have bars but I can’t find where your liquor’s at
- Plus your style needs to CHANGE cuz you failed to bring the Nickleback
- You aint got nothing to OfferUp, the way you tryina Link-in-Parks
- Fake Chester, soundin like a molester that probably sings with gauze
- All up in his mouth, id like to see what your artistry could bring
- But I can’t stay off the fact you sound constipated when you sing!
- I heard you aint got an adams apple, what dawg... you got an adam’s peach?!
- Get it? Its like an atom’s speech. You’re miniscule like mini-me!
- At most you’re a molecule not even worth a body
- Im still tryina figure out how u picked soundin stupid as a hobby
- Bottom line…I must say You must really be on that reefer
- To think your sick horse voice matches your persona of a Diva
- But this is Ill Wordz, so there really aint a Cure to see
- Especially since you’re still caught up with your lil insecurities!
DEFENDER'S RAP
- When prepping for this battle with sickverbz
- wait... what? that's not his moniker?
- woozyscriptz? queasycommentz?
- fuck how could i forget such a brilliant name!
- i remember it being super cliche, like he drafted it up when he was just 8
- like he subtly drops it on every date...
- like somehow the name will help him get laid
- ILLWORDZ OF COURSE!
- now watch me stamp that look off his face
- and bring an english frank to spain like king Charlemagne
- with every verse he leaves his soul on the track like some athletes feet
- he envisions each decision with precision that's a prophecy
- but this prophet only sees his profits cease with every beat he's leased
- so i guess he goes against the grain of his predictions like he's Socrates
- He embodies the four pillars like he's Aristotle residing in the marble
- madly tagging up a wall like it's about to be discounted
- the blind trying to lead the greats but he's swiftly ousted once the gangs green
- i'll end his diabetic papi's life quicker then the sun king catching gangrene
- that's the third luis killed in this track and
- like luis the third i'll leave his cranium cracked
- pull a subzero fatality, there ain't nothing that is colder then that
- i'll cave in his crown and tear the spine from his back
- so when i mince words it doesn't mean i ain't afraid to speak from the heart
- it means when i pull back to take shots i'm prince Paris hitting every weakspot!
- see i am offtrack and recently i been conflicted
- i could lie another time and prove i'm more then just vindictive
- or i could tell the ugly truth, it doesn't take a fucking sleuth,
- to see it really left a scar when your mother left your dad, your bros, and you?
- right? i can feel the hurt within you emanating from your body
- how your daddy upgraded from that bitch
- and she'll end up dead without nobody
- you took to writing as a hobby
- but deep inside you missed your mommy
- so you started smoking trees like forest fires
- traded in bullwinkle for wood shingle when life was getting rocky
- hitting rocks became a practice like shaolin training
- hows that for a temple tap?
- the habit shook him to his core and left his whole fucking mantel cracked
- so now it isn't just his frame and facial features that resemble rats
- it may be a stretch too say i hate this Mexican more then Klan members
- but it's clear this European will take the gold like cortez did to your ancestors
- when he advanced westwards