Battles BELLVADEAR vs Y-Fi
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THIS BATTLE IS OVER
BELLVADEAR won this battle!
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- Wanted a written on something a bit more romantic
- but I'm so ambiguious, you see right and left handed
- so perceive this how you want but I'm sure very few
- will underline the message, within this point of view
- I saw you standing over by that 'bar' so handsome you did look
- but I can't judge you on appearance the message is in the 'astrobook'
- This could be a 'Notebook' story or another Great Gatsby
- maybe it's in my head, would he see or notice, perhaps he
- would think it was a mischeivious preconcived idea
- having no clues his self about how laws of attraction would feel
- Others had seen him as Lelantos, he was actually Eros
- but to me, he was omnipotent in his design, though
- I may not be Asteria but I'll catch you when you fall behind
- I am no Aphrodite but I could paint you cosmos for eternal time
- love you more, deeper,despite what any other 'supernovastars' say
- cast them away, burn them out, if they wage war your way,
- when they are finished using you and all your lights they burned
- I'll wrap and repair what's broken and safely you'll return
- to the place in the moonlight above the average planets
- a solid rock moon they can't see made of aphanite
- [like their understanding of you as small as a nanite\
- what am I doing here, he's just to 'out of this worldly'
- Is he God or an undefined 'unEarthling'
- He must be from another place and moment
- Beacause my hearts and stars, just got shot by a bowman
DEFENDER'S RAP
- i see you standing out the distance
- like an army ready for armistice
- and that's a violent scene but hush your conscious it's just part of my scheme
- see sometimes i can get a bit extreme
- manipulate everyday moments into something obscene
- but i can see you are not that type of queen
- so i try play my cards right and stray from my usual routine
- Bring my true colours to the open in hopes that you stop shining so golden
- but you keep the bravado up
- and i've just about had enough
- strut like you distance from the sluts
- but i can see through the layers of makeup
- i'm working around trying to convince you my motives ain't evil
- but your passiveness isn't peaceful
- lethal
- that strong type cerebral
- and everytime i talk i seem to feel feeble
- so i try kick in the diesel
- you seem to enjoy that
- this a one sided game and i'm not in the mood to chat
- so i turn my back and tap out of the game
- but you stop me on my way
- and you start talking again
- your eyes play tricks like i got something to gain
- i'm so strained from this shit
- is it all in vain?
- so i go along
- and i could prolong my tale till the break of dawn
- but let's not get drawn into this song
- say something like "suck my dong"
- cause there's a lot of fakes on this site who really don't belong
- would rather hear meaningless rhymes than something strong
- so keep dissing in your shit, forget about the art form
- and reform your ideas of how to perform
- cause when i transform to my final form
- half of y'all gonna need to find a new platform
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- I'm taking a break, too many sheep in this industry