Battles  Hollieriley vs KomodoChiya

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

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  • All the times you said you'd never leave me,
  • all the times you told me just to let it be.
  • You told me i was stronger than i thought,
  • Even after all the times we stayed up and fought.
  • I need to get you out of my mind,
  • because lovin' you, damn it made me so blind.
  • I just feel like all i wanna do is cry,
  • cause all you did was fill my head with lies.
  • I tell my friends im okay with it all,
  • but truth is i aint fine at all.
  • You been playin with my heart and i just stood back and let you,
  • when all i really should of done was left you.
  • You hid your real feelings, yeah that was really smart,
  • but in the end all you did was break my heart,
  • You just stood back and watched me play my part.
  • I should've just listened to my friends when they told me it would be the end.
  • They always told me that we wouldnt last,
  • but i thought all that was just in your past.
  • i just wish i could go back in time,
  • just to the moment that i made you mine.
  • 'cos i regret that, more than anything
  • 'cos to you, i was just another thing.
  • Used me just to pass your time,
  • i didnt realise that love was a crime.
  • But now im done, so i guess you win....

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • ( So, There was no rules specified, So to make it fair. I'll follow the same
  • template you did )
  • Held hands night after night
  • Love was a near sight,
  • Hearts were tight flyin' above life itself, I'd call it a kite.
  • But what I thought might never happen happened and the grip lost,
  • Not tight anymore,
  • After all the fights and the cuddling
  • I thought we could make it right, Kept snuggling
  • Till they're was no might, Now I'm smuggling
  • My emotions they're starting to bundle in.
  • Said I was the only one for you, Guess that was a lie
  • And from the ashes the truth arise
  • Left gettin' with another guy.
  • Saying "you'll be better off without me right?"
  • But meanwhile I'm praying. "This is just a dream above the height"
  • A month later and it's not, It's a strain for my brain to just concentrate
  • Thinking about how you said it wasn't fate
  • Tears rollin' down my eyes, My pupils rollin off the prize,
  • Alcohol going down the drain before I capsize,
  • Bottoms up as I fantasize
  • what I would be like, if the mistakes were gone
  • But I just can't, It's like a drug I'm on

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