Battles  MrSavageKP vs Xerxes-the-BFG

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Losing somebody, emotional attachment.

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DEFENDER'S RAP

  • ( 0.14 -ish ) A storm is a'brewing, we hear it a'blowing,
  • But as yet, we have no way of a'knowing,
  • From where it might stem, nor where it is head,
  • Nor which way the river is flowing,
  • All we get is the stench, of sickness and death,
  • Half able to hear *crows a'crowing
  • As we're swept in the night, tops of waves oh so white,
  • No strength left to keep up the rowing -
  • Yes we're swept in a tide, of terror and lies,
  • With no strength to keep on with rowing.
  • So most will sit tight, despite the great height,
  • Of the "water" that threatens their "boat".
  • They'll fight and they'll gripe, take fright at the sight,
  • Only think to keep *them*selves afloat (*INSTINCT MUSIC*)
  • But instead I wonder, in the raging thunder,
  • Of the destruction of all that ever we knew,
  • If this awful blunder, might cure the hunger,
  • That til now posed such a great issue..?
  • *I mean what are we to do, if we can't get through,
  • All the stupid shit our leaders, got us into?
  • If you're fed fake news, dopamine and booze,
  • Then of course you're not in, a fit state to choose..*
  • -Which sneaky little politician rules the roost.-
  • (1.05-ish)So we few stay away, hoping maybe someday
  • That we'll see the world somehow, come out ok,
  • Those few that have strayed, from what seemed our fate
  • Sit around a fire, trying to celebrate,
  • Singing -
  • --So sat by the river, we drink to the days,
  • Not all that long gone, though it feels like an age,
  • Trying oh so hard not to, remember the pain,
  • Of that sweet little riverbed, where you now lay.--
  • ( Dramatic speed Increase)-Cos the death came strong, when they dropped those bombs,
  • On every town and city, that you could think of,
  • And now those who survive, try to eke out our lives,
  • Without thinking of all those we knew, who died,
  • For no reason other than the "need" for more power,
  • More wealth, more land, and more people to make cower,
  • Your freedom's were the price for the things they devour, (ed)
  • Yet WE allowed them to rule, despite their Faulty Tower's...

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