Battles  user334187465 vs ablackrose

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

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  • Magic breathes life in our hearts
  • Destiny resides in our souls
  • Our path now shimmers unshadowed by the night
  • With one embrace partnered by a tender kiss, the bounds
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  • of time and distance crumble through fingers like drifting
  • grains of sand
  • Dream time is the place where I am alive
  • Green eyes ripple into lipid pools where miracles draw me
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  • to your heart
  • I am free to swim by your side until the sun sets and
  • rises with you again
  • Life is my dream
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  • I love you

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • yo.. is this a challenge? or a pussy as poem ..with no rythem..
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  • ur writing skills weak
  • but imma give u a little peek into rap...
  • ill respond to ur challenge and tell u a females deal
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  • 1 if u gonna write her a song fucking sing it to her dont make it a big deal..
  • 2 and if the bitch dont love u thats so fucking whacckk \
  • keep making tracks lets vibe with drake and do battles back to back!
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  • ungreatful or greedy? there is a fine line
  • bitches so sleezy but they just basic as grapes on a grape vine
  • a bit of wine, ooo look at ur girl now shes mine?
  • stupid ho. hands out of ur pants. u so slow.no flow.
  • trying to own the show.... but lezbihonest i might fuck her tho
  • the thing is mr man dont put pussy on a shrine
  • these hoes aint loyal. they'll wanna leave u to be royal! ♥

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