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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • Theres this girl, Shes hijacked my mind
  • Shes like an angel and super model combined
  • Shes one of them girls thats impossible to find
  • And I thought to myself get too close and you'll end up getting declined.
  • Seein her made my heart beat too fast, her body was too defined
  • And her face just shined, I swear I wanted her to be mine.
  • The thought of her sent shivers down my spine
  • Doing something to harm her would be the worst crime.
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  • And I cant even start to describe how she made feel
  • The way I got the butterflies was just unreal
  • The thought of her being mine was so fucking ideal
  • She span my mind around like a water wheel
  • When I daze at her walking from a distance my jaw always dropped.
  • And when i knew she acknowledged my existance my heart always stopped.
  • She was so perfect, no disrespect, she always had me instantly erect
  • I couldnt never even find a defect. or maybe I should get my eyes rechecked
  • incorrect, she looks better than those fakes with special effects
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  • Babe, honestly, you everything I ever wished for
  • Theres nothing about you that I dont adore
  • Please take my hand, and above everyone we'll soar
  • I swear I'll take you to a place you've never explored before
  • I look into your eyes, straight away you have me hypnotized
  • after seeing her, I didnt even need a zoot, she had me more fucked than those illegal highs
  • Being in her presense was like my greatest prize,
  • I just wish I could get more closer.
  • But I'm scared shes something that I wont get over.
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  • My aim is to find the key to her heart
  • Be able to unlock it and then give it a kick start
  • But I need to realize its gonna be way too hard
  • Theres a big chance of me getting terribly scarred
  • Im never gonna find a girl like her though
  • Why cant I force myselft to let go ?
  • Maybe I havent had enough of the love that she shows
  • For the things that she made me realize, my life i owe
  • and so, I want her to know, that she makes my tears glow
  • when im trying find my way
  • through the dark tunnel, where theres no light and no place to go
  • so I thank her deeply for the gift that she bestowed.
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  • Enough of this shit having to be so complicated
  • And too much have I contemplated
  • getting sedated, doin my ting, months went by as I patiently waited
  • till she slowly stopped keeping me updated.
  • And it was unrated, the way that she vacated.
  • The horror of a broken heart that she recreated.
  • There was no way to have my feelings expressed.
  • I was way more than just depressed
  • I was distressed, dissapointed, and possibly possessed.
  • My heart wanted to go ona protest.
  • After that I understood lifes just a test,
  • and theres no rest, until you've fully completed your quest.
  • will start hitting you from north, east, south, west
  • And theres a limit on the amount of life vests
  • If your not carefull your mind and body will end up dispossesed.
  • Now you dont wanna be put to an eternal rest?

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • You only get two stars your mediocre
  • Hope you ain't in the clutch because you a choker
  • You couldn't afford to be a smoker
  • You rap so bad you had to pawn it and I'm the pawn broker
  • Scared to go in my store
  • Come back for more
  • The clocks ticking and I'm running up the score
  • Three pointers? I go for four
  • My raps like a museum wanna take the tour?
  • Shit you cant rap and ya tryin to grab the title
  • Shit youl sound like crap, man, I swear on the bible
  • You done fucked up and fucked with the wrong rival
  • You must just be lyrically goin suicidal
  • It's do or die though
  • And you gonna die slow
  • It's my show
  • Channelin' Norman Bates, stormin' gates, I'm a psycho
  • You aint took nobody's mic yo, you wouldn't know what to do wit' it
  • You shine like a broken light bulb, you must be new wit' it
  • So slow witted when you spit it
  • Ya fuckin' idiot, why don't you quit it? Think you came hard but Y O U didn't
  • So dumb ya bum, ya just caint admit it, it's so damn pitiful
  • Sorry if I'm a bit analytical
  • Yes, I am critical
  • Yes I spit flames
  • This punk spits flem, or is that slobber?
  • Maybe it's not a game
  • Well then, somebody come and get this todler
  • You'r a joke
  • So are your rhymes
  • You SUCK
  • I'd tell ya a thousand times
  • But you don't listen
  • Like a KID that doesn't pay attention
  • Somebody come get this
  • A.D.D. remedial throwback dicklss
  • Ridiculous wack Bitch, I'm sick of his
  • Kendergarten tactics
  • Everything he's impartin's wack shit
  • I take the art and craft it
  • Smack 'em into a backflip
  • When I rap these bars of mine
  • Planets and stars align
  • A prodigy like me is hard to find
  • I'm well trained in the art of rhyme
  • And my words are my nunchucks
  • So I get Bruce Lee on ya dumb fux
  • Hey, I'm just gettin' warmed up
  • We can can get dirtier than a porn fuk
  • Wit' a born slut and camera crew
  • Might have to show y'all a thing a two
  • That's exactly what I mean ta do
  • So sit and listen and pay attention, I'm not through
  • If rap was a pussie I'd leave it bruised and battered
  • I hate to leave y'all's illusions shattered
  • But I could beat y'all wit' my arms tied, on a skateboard cruisin' backwards

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