Battles Velvet vs Mottee
RULES
Has to be about someone you love or loved.
Max of 25 lines
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- I loved you, you made me, hate me
- You gave me hate, see?
- It saved me and these tears are deadly
- You feel that I rip back, every time you tried to steal that
- You feel bad, you feel sad?
- I'm sorry, hell no fuck that
- It was my heart, it was my life, it was my start, it was your knife
- This strife, it dies, this life and these lies
- And these lungs, have sung, this song, for too long,
- And it's true, I hurt too, remember I loved you
- I wish I could have quit you, I wish I never missed you
- And told you that I loved you, every time I fucked you
- The future that we both drew, and all the shit we've been through,
- Obsessed with the thought of you, the pain just grew and grew.
- How could you do this to me?
- Look at what I made for you, it never was enough and the world is what I gave to you
- I used to be love struck, now I'm just fucked up,
- Pull up my sleeves and see the pattern of my cuts
- Seems like all we had is over now you left to rest
- And your tears are dried up now, you just lay without a sound
- Seems like all we had is over now, you left to rest
- And my fears are over now
- I can leave with my head down
DEFENDER'S RAP
- Started out as a starter nothing special about this bic lighter
- Spat at a pace slower than tortoise at his race
- Had rhymes like this, lines more overused than quotes from jesus
- You came through and showed me what real battle rap do
- Came through and when you left I flew
- You came through then disappeared, I was sick at your disappearance
- But my flow got better, peeps said I had the flu
- The day we met I'd rue
- You came back tho
- Over the warm season we became close, considered you my bro
- Became legends in a game of legends, best duo, close friends
- All good things come to an end
- Come christmas you were gone again
- I had to endure the new version solo
- Had no one to measure, had no one to see my bars in pleasure
- I got compliments from the weaker like "sure"
- I got complacent, no movement in my progress
- Topped my self so many times since you left, never felt the achievement
- I went from the pinnacle of approachable
- To "walk near and your roastable"
- Granted I never roasted but the vibe was there
- Now I'm writing this song bout you wondering where you went to
- Do you got someone to vent to?
- If so, that ain't fair