Battles  TommyP vs tlc15

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

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DEFENDER'S RAP

  • Don't be astounded by the sound of the nouns
  • The swerve of the verbs, the gentle curve of the exponential,
  • Worldwide continental, the next best, the sequential,
  • True test is to reach my potential, first by observing the nerves and
  • Herding my words, disturbing my brain, and taming the mental
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  • Pearly white gates like my dental
  • Heaven doesn't wait for the man in the temple
  • Look around you its simple, before its too late
  • The self hate, the wealth craved, its all fake
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  • So on this date, consider the bitter cost of what the mind can create
  • Its not destiny, its not fate, life,
  • you think you've bested me?
  • I figured you out, now I've got to relate what I know and make haste
  • No time to waste, I'm struggling but I'm thinking I'm beginning to pick up the pace
  • Phonetics used to fuel a pathetic rat race, I am the judge and my mind is my case
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  • I am now in control, Its taking its toll
  • But I'm setting my goals, plotted my path upon the hottest of coals
  • Focusing the hocus pocus on some sandy shoals
  • Optics on tropics, my topics hypnotic
  • I'm spinning cyclonic, still the shit like colonic, Stop it

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