Battles Big_Nasty vs Dominic_Rapdaddy
RULES
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- I made mess in heaven becouse i gave my love to devil
- Soul is worthless in this age of governmental
- You are lucky if you find a job that doesnt break your mental
- Who ever wants job in office has no potential
- I dont want to be an edgy rebel but being dull and little is lifes anal
- Telling yourself that everything is ok why still believe in fables
- You realy think that thear is heaven?
- Going to church will make all better?
- Then why thears no love amongst man whatsoever
- Thinking that plesures makes life better, well i know thats a lie cuz im illuminated
- This is naked truth and if your not brain dead you will get it
- Life is not for hopefull but for dedicated
- If you trust all people then be prepared to get devastated
- Stabed in a back, burned to cinder atleast youl get educated
- Life is a bitch and i just feel frustrated
DEFENDER'S RAP
- I've been through hell and back, call me Dante Alighieri.
- I've had friends walk away from me and it felt scary.
- I've had a talent for writing, and very unfairly,
- The craft shifted to rap and I knew it wouldn't spare me.
- I booted up my laptop and threw some rhymes down,
- Just to see if I could watch all my regrets drown.
- I've seen love, I've held it in my hands and let it go.
- And I now I'm here battling people I don't know.
- If you want deep, I'll share all of my thoughts with you.
- Don't get greedy 'cause if you do, then dude you're bound to lose.
- If you think there's something better out there think it through first.
- Talk it through with God, maybe step into a church.
- 'Cause I've given up on love and still don't forgive myself.
- The feeling still beats in me like I've never felt.
- And it may not come back, so before it's too late.
- Hold on to those you love so you don't repeat my mistakes.