Battles  ashtonirwinswife vs Hutch

RULES

Has to be sad and poetic. No death though.

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • Life's a tangled web
  • Of cell phone calls and hashtag I-don't-knows
  • And you you're so caught up
  • In all the blinking lights and dial tones
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  • But..
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  • You are my getaway
  • You are my favourite place
  • We put the world away
  • Yeah we're so disconnected
  • And I find my sweet escape when I’m alone with you
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  • Turn off the radio
  • Those late night TV shows
  • Hang up the telephone
  • I wish that you could just be here with me...
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  • Then I remember the day you told me you were leaving
  • I remember the makeup running down your face
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  • Sometimes I start to wonder, was it just a lie?
  • If what we had was real, how could you be fine?
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  • Cause I’m not fine at all
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  • You were my getaway
  • You were my favourite place
  • We used to put the world away
  • and get so disconnected,
  • And I found my sweet escape when I was alone with you
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  • Don't waste your time on me you're already,
  • the voice inside my head (I miss you, I miss you)

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • She told me that I'm the reason she didn't pick up and use a knife,
  • She told me that for two years, pain was sweet in her eyes,
  • She cries herself to sleep, with tears so painful they bleed,
  • If it hadn't been for me, her life would've been in jeopardy,
  • At night she asks me to sing her one of my melodies,
  • Cause in her mind, my one voice sounds like a full symphony,
  • Her life full of mysteries, and sinister visions peek,
  • Her thoughts are constantly full of devilish menacing,
  • She wishes she could be the referee of her story,
  • Instead of darkened fiends writing her fucking history,
  • Craves a loving family, a dad happily married,
  • Instead of her dreams being buried and no one there helping,
  • Every night spent lonely, no memories worth holding,
  • A mother full of scolding in an apartment building,
  • Razor blades in hand hoping her life will change slowly,
  • She told me I'm the reason she didn't pick up and use a knife,

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