Battles  YLG vs V3NUS

RULES

16-24 lines Written only, non recorded

Max of 24 lines

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

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DEFENDER'S RAP

  • Who am I to judge how the story unfolds
  • with the humanities darkness, the least peaceful artest
  • Why is my mind always the one to test?
  • Maybe Ive been to quiet, instead of my lettin insane mind riot
  • Fuck you, your decisions, your mistakes
  • Fuck you, your life position, you damn fakes
  • Damn hate, I got for ya'll...
  • I was always the idiot to trust much, but now there aint such
  • Always looked at as shady, maybe.
  • Just because I see shit from where you can't it dont mean im weird
  • I just got a little more to fear, all this stupid comments cut the core shear
  • And Im done with being the nice guy all the time
  • Fall of mind wrecking thoughts rolling down my head to the spine until my ideas align
  • A line of destruction, thoughts and disruption while thinking about what Ill do tomorrow
  • To sorrow of myself I live up to
  • My parents hate my girlfriend, I love her so I have to hide her from them
  • Them times when I was with her, my soul hovered the grounds in the sky like a bird
  • And then when my parents cut shit off I plummeted to the dirt
  • Why can't I be me?Why do my decision seem silly? Man fuck
  • IM Annoyed, Im not okay, Im sorry for the words in delay, but I know what to say
  • How do I describe, the hate I have thanks to what you removed, my faith...
  • But now its too late...
  • Lets move on...

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