Battles  RazorV vs Carla

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Ay,yet again,somebody got to respond,to your challenge before I can uplode,my rap... I have,only broken,your last rule Good luck :)

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • My life is love
  • but,my love,was my life
  • I don't need a life guard
  • when I guard,my life...
  • Young heart,with an old mind
  • which was about to learn,to find
  • that,which is blind...
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  • Yeah,I was so blinded,with it
  • that I forgot,that I needed
  • sight,so I can,oversee,that which I
  • couldn't see,bye bye...I was to die
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  • I walked,with death,she slept,on my bed
  • so ya'll can call,my story..."Walking Dead"
  • which is true,cuz I know,that some of you
  • know,what true pain,does to two ...
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  • So I can,be a better MC
  • RazorV,had to agree,to disagree
  • but,don't only,one who,had to go trough
  • which I had to suffer,will understand,what I stand !
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  • -By RazorV ^_o

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • surviving love is hard
  • think I need a life guard cuz life hard
  • young heart broke so my tongue start choke
  • woke up in my broke cup no club
  • key unlock door but what was that for
  • he block more on floor shaking
  • calling me a whore count to four and there's war
  • taking good hope and start making wood rope
  • on a slope but nope globe don't care
  • strobe won't dare mess with me he talk less
  • I said yes in a dress he couldn't guess
  • anyway over it here to stay not sofa sit
  • if I had a choice then I would of hit and not quit
  • got a voice pen in London one push of a button in a dozen cousin function
  • this mind under construction
  • miss find wonder obstruction
  • rhymes need reduction I'm on times speed,
  • I mean limes feed yeah indeed
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