Battles  Saint_James vs LadyVenom

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Round 3. Written battle. 50 lines. Vote Fairly. If your not gonna read then dote vote.

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THIS BATTLE IS OVER

Saint_James won this battle!

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Battle on October 2 2016

CHALLENGER'S RAP

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DEFENDER'S RAP

  • Who thinks James is the greatest? Them new fags he swaps links with?
  • 'Vote for me I'll make your Rappad life better' that shit fuckin stinks bitch!
  • Just a few rachet teens that think Cheif Keef is the goat,
  • Coz let's be real here, based on skill- this shit won't even be close
  • I'm a sinister menace that'll diminish ya presence
  • You're just a fake thug that doesn't make sense when beginning a sentence,
  • My perpetual motion is an incredible notion, bringin more fire than a petrol explosion,
  • When I'm vexed I expose um' with sets of froze potions, punchin so hard you might get ya jaw broken
  • You just spit fast raps in an attempt to prove you can disperse and serve shit
  • See James is what happens when drunk parents don't use contraception,
  • Mom probably forgot to take her pill and daddy wishin he'd lost his erection,
  • See James ain't got no daddy, that absent alcoholic was always abusive
  • He used to rape James whilst he was calling him useless, that shit' was fuckin ruthless,
  • Everytime that bitch looked you in the eyes she probably wished she'd aborted you!
  • Look at the piece of shit this fucking' wannabe has formed into,
  • A jobless man with no ambitions but Rappad- spends every night tryna convince us he's Rap's man,
  • You're WACK FAG!! A fuckin' dragged out wannabe black man that's drastically trash man!
  • I'm an elocutionist producin the rudest wit and abusive spit
  • I execute verbs, my metaphorical artillery rocks, it's putrid kid,
  • Look at this fuckin nerd, walking wankster that looks fuckin stupid,
  • Thinks he looks so cool in them clothes, but this cock looks fuckin foolish,
  • Your whole swaggers embarrasing, so nerdy and white,
  • Is it any wonder all your ex-girlfriend have turned into a dykes?
  • Redneck motherfucker, you're simply trash from a trailer,
  • You'd probably make out with your sister, eat her and nail her,
  • You spend the majority of your life trying to impress young men on the web,
  • Tryna get noticed so you can eject all your debts, live with your mom and welfare's your only cheque
  • I gotta ask you James, have you got an occupation? Do you do any form of real education?
  • Now I admire you're fire and that raw dedication, but you're foolish if you think you'll make it, get famous,
  • You need a new outlet, another ambition, you spend your whole life spittin rap written to these bastards and pigeons
  • You ain't Slim james- that's obese and overweight, you tryna be Shady but your profile- all straight,
  • You act like a gangster but you've never been arrested you tell all your friends that jail was the bestest,
  • James what made you want more? Got me thinking you're a masochist
  • I murdered you twice motherfucker, turned you to a pacifist with placidness,
  • You can't box the venom, I'm to shifty with these passages, it's savageness
  • I'm like Arsene Wenger when it's Arsenal/Arsonal that I'm managing,
  • I'll bludgeon your weak attempts at crushin me with those sexist puns,
  • Coz the fact is this bitch is tight, it's kinda like I'm sexin nuns'
  • I shook the ice like global warmin, Now it's time u face the pro,
  • Plus I'm a gta fan, so I don't have a problem with destroying saint's row!!
  • Yea u on a nice streak but I came to end it, you're like Paul Scholesman, you suck at defending!
  • You rap fast, that's cool but in battle you need intellect, take away your flow and your game just got no interest,
  • But I'm Troy Polamalu, I'm to strong when I intercept
  • I've bodied you twice with my sick and poisoness penmanship,
  • You'd need a billion dollars to be avoiding these sentences,
  • You'd need Clinton as your lawyer and a judge that's bias,
  • I'll hack your style to death without accountrements and plyers,
  • Fuck your game you're just a basic scavenger, I'll keep James in the box like David's manager!
  • You can't erase this challenger- I'm apeshit and harder,
  • I'll create a Saint James massacre like the Liberation Army coz you're to basic to harm her
  • Your style aint corpulent, it's malnourished kid, I'm a calculated sorceress, you'll get buried kid,
  • Fuck with me you'll perish quick, I'll slip you some potassium like Geril's bitch!

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