Battles  GroteskIsDead vs Lyrassist

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

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  • the mirror is chipped from your appearance when you peered in it,
  • tears that drip reveal the fear within,
  • your spirit is, pierced and ripped, there ain't no cure for it...
  • the jury's in,... to convict this public pretender
  • the subject surrender is coming up
  • so why don't you run with your head first
  • and become a one hit wonder
  • as you're hitting a brick wall
  • better leave the kids alone with this "lyrical" big talk.
  • but your materials inferior to any written I lift off
  • when you spit it I cringe STOP!
  • cause you sound like a pissed off
  • middle aged woman with menopause
  • mixed with a sick dog
  • now listen just sit watch
  • to this lesson in hip hop
  • your sentence is death in a sentence
  • you'll need like 10'of those big mops
  • with the mess that will drip off
  • from the wreckage I wrecked him
  • lyrical rape in the mental rectum
  • you're starting to feel hot
  • dropping flames the block is the inferno
  • a dragon who's spitting words for you to burn slow
  • but there's no order with this dragon when all I cause is disorder
  • I walk and stand alone & still stand when the trips over
  • demolished you once, so obvious you never did homework
  • cause you think your schemes are complex
  • but really they're like fiends trying to get sober
  • one failed attempt after another and your response will be a relapse
  • cuz you got bombed and beat so you gotta respond in heat as I put my seat back
  • but don't try too hard and make it too long to read likee you're ready to relax
  • but in actuality it'll be hard to follow in these tracks
  • take your time read a book and structure your
  • bars different
  • cuz ever piece you put out it seems like a parts missing
  • kinda like you never oil change a cars engine
  • a bunch of knocking and nonsense
  • can't wait for you songs ending
  • cuz consequently this imposters pretending
  • to be somewhat of a block legend
  • but your perceived number one spot
  • is nothing but talk so stop end it

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • Groteskisdead
  • yea well who cares
  • I wouldn't shoot fair even if you were alive
  • my shit hotter half ass than when ya' strive
  • am I battling you or a priest? either way you can't touch me
  • all your shit the same, am I a Jew? (achoo) nope just allergic to redundancy
  • you're quite fervent for a Christian rapper, but you should know better then to cross a god, in this battle you'll be a victim after, you said I shit talk a lot?
  • then why are you the one brown nosing?
  • you just want to be relevant, ironic that you're gonna get killed for the hell of it
  • like its a coincidence really that after leading the board that you dissin me
  • no I don't care about popularity, but if you try to uproot me I'll leave your ass hanging from a poplar tree
  • I don't like to see you choke, Joey,
  • but you've provoked me, hopefully you don't honestly hope fully
  • to out do me in potent poetry,
  • you're mine now, like a son, I'll hit you with the solar beam,
  • you're comical, like a panel, but the wrong kind to help you against me,
  • absorb me? how? you're getting torched by me
  • let's diagnose you're style, it's quite mechanical, robotic pen, despotic intent, like no one can damage you, like you take a sabbatical and suddenly you think I can't black sabbath you
  • like you'll pick up where you left off
  • I swear these bitches think they got a CRAZY TRAIN of thought till I bite their fucking heads off
  • And no I'm not a legend of the block, not cause I'm less then,
  • but cause I haven't left yet,
  • should be more careful what you call me,
  • let alone try to stalk me,
  • like I'm they prey and you're the one aimin, when in reality pray is what you should do and amen is what you should be sayin'
  • you're getting jacked up like your kid with a tire iron, yea I saw the video, changed my mind, you got a shitty flow, bitter sweet ass cavity, trick or treat that's has cavities on holloween, but who am I "kidding" this a hollow win like hollow tips when Jodye asked your wife to swallow dick, are you sure you shoulda chose me? come here from rappad like what your pen needs when you write a scarlet letter full of backdraft,
  • I mean I put my LIFE on the line, like my memoir in my nap sack
  • you're just another "body" that I've cut "clean" through with the "AXE"
  • and that's that
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  • ps
  • to say you beat me last time is like what made that bitch eat the apple
  • don't claim you defeated me when we never did battle

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