Battles Tomahawke vs Harsh
RULES
Written battle Rules: -Written only -A song you made Since I am new and foreign (thus lyricism is improvable) I would appreciate feedback
Max of 64 lines
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- //Verse 1
- Now I am about to tell a story
- About a young one named corey
- He grew up in a bad neighborhood, with people only warring
- Seeing others do harm, affected him strongly
- So the choice was made, he was gonna join the forces
- So he could protect, the ones he held dear, and build a career
- His life was put in sixth gear, his mission was clear, he had no fear
- As he went through training, his dreams became reality
- He was part of something bigger, got a brand new family
- Finished rapidly, a strong boy with lots of apathy
- Soon they were to be deployed, to a far land - destroyed
- //Hook
- War, horrid to the core
- Why we do this anymore
- Kids walking with the M4
- Blasting through the door
- Yea, it's
- War, horrid to the core
- Why we do this anymore
- Kids walking with the M4
- Blasting through the door
- It's war
- //Verse 2
- Walking on the battlefield, a weapon he would wield
- Bullets flying everywhere, he made a quick prayer
- This the moment he'd trained for, he was hardcore
- There was a score, to settle, with these filthy terrorists
- Occupying settlements, killing innocents, life on the front - was hard
- Corey saw too much, mind scarred
- It was, ripping at his heart
- Flashbacks to his youth, when he saw the death come close
- The moment all changed, an IED killed the guys he called bro's
- Now devils start lurking in the shadows, the shadows
- //Hook
- War, horrid to the core
- Why we do this anymore
- Kids walking with the M4
- Blasting through the door
- Yea, it's
- War, horrid to the core
- Why we do this anymore
- Kids walking with the M4
- Blasting through the door
- It's war
- //Verse 3
- Coming back home, suffering from the disorder
- All the people that got killed, slaughtered
- Seen people explode and tortured
- Got him depressed, it was messed
- Drinking a habit, then drugs were added
- Slowly losing sanity, it's a tragedy
- When his best buddy overdosed, his mind turned to a ghost
- All cuz of the post, his story closed
- Forever, all cuz the terror
- He grabbed the gun, put it to his head
- Then all over, all over, he was dead...
DEFENDER'S RAP
- i live in a country called india
- ganesha krishna vishnu lord shiva
- searching for god's people's obsession
- but people dying on the street get no observaton
- here poor gets poorer and rich gets richa'
- satisfied with their lives fuck the pooa
- riding their range rova being drunk as fuck
- crushing homeless people cuz they got no luck
- being rich and powerful they get away with it
- their money speaks, while dead remains voiceless
- criminals got the streets full, murderers and rapists
- parents freak, coz safety for their girl dont exists
- living in a nation thats poverty stricken
- drug abuse on the rise, unemployment
- people use no contraception, overpopulation
- sickness, illness, disease, need medication
- let me explain the situation with example
- let me tell you why this life aint gentle
- there lived a lady in the slums of dharavi
- next twenty bars dedicated to her story
- became a mother when she was nineteen
- lived with her family in a shack made of nine tin sheets
- conditions bad, they lived like swine in shit
- lives in their surrounding were no different
- she got two sons and two daughter
- this is the problem, people got no brain
- they make babies even when they livin in a gutter
- they only increase expenses not gains
- she serves the rich, household worker
- cleaning houses was her job, a broom and a mop
- earning little wages, people make more money in an year
- than shes gonna make in her whole ages
- the kids are young, gotta go to school
- but the fathers an alcoholic, the money
- earned by the ladies goes to the man, thats the rule
- instead of investing in education, he buys whisky
- hes a worthless piece of shit, frustrated with his life
- every night he gets drunk like shit, rapes and beats up his wife
- theres nothing she can do, male dominant society
- no were she can go, after all its her family
- but one night, man got a sharp pain in his gut
- he couldnt fight, the pain was too much
- taken to a hospital, surgical situation
- he was dying of pain, lever failure
- doctors said, hes almost gone, have no hope
- she cried for the man who gave her nothing but pain
- he was dead by the dawn, she didnt want to let him go
- this shit hit her like a hurricane
- but things changes after his death, positive
- she earned money peacefully, while children went to school
- compared to present, their past was an apocalypse
- weathers nomore cloudy and stormy, only breezy and cool
- we have a similar life, the man is the evil in life
- the children future, and the good are the daughter and wife
- gotta let go off the evil, no matter how much you love them
- or you life'll be a mayhem