Battles  Cold_Hazy vs R3D

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Please keep profanity low. Also write something thats deep and depressing. Second rule have fun i dont care if you win or i win.

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • I dont need your apology or sympathy,
  • Understand that means so much to me
  • Everybody just making up these rhymes
  • But they cant even make a simple dime
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  • It hunts me in my dreams every time
  • that im just kid, That cant rap a rhyme
  • Climb up and down just press rewind
  • I wish i could just turn back time
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  • I dont need your apology or sympathy,
  • Understand that means so much to me
  • Everybody just making up these rhymes
  • But they cant even make a simple dime
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  • I committed crime
  • just thinking of who kill inside
  • Just to tell them that i tried
  • See, I'm not just standing on a cliff, I'm also getting older
  • I not turning stiff
  • So i dont need your apology or sympathy,
  • Understand that means so much to me

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • Depressing shit describes my life
  • always being put down, pushed back no matter how hard I strive
  • Crack baby born to a wannabe porn star
  • not having a memory of her is probably my worst scar
  • adopted at three
  • by a woman who only wanted a ring from my daddy
  • jealous of the fact I was there before her
  • and didn't really care about my future
  • perfection was for what I strived
  • being my sister, when I said I wasn't jealous of her, I lied
  • she had everything I wanted
  • she was pretty and smart and for one she had my dad's heart
  • I am the poster child for daddy issues
  • but I don't use it as an excuse
  • I push myself harder everyday
  • coz sitting around feeling sorry for your self doesn't pay
  • At 16 I realized that this life wasn't what I wanted
  • by my past and all the yelling and beating I was haunted
  • Blade in my hand eyeing my wrist
  • moving it carefully across my skin like it was a paintbrush and I was an artist
  • I stopped before I it got worse
  • no one was gonna get the best of me, they'll get what they deserved

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