Battles R3D vs CHK_DEATHWISH
RULES
no rules, prefer an experienced rapper, real life experiences
Max of 64 lines
THIS BATTLE IS OVER
R3D won this battle!
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Battle on September 24 2016
CHALLENGER'S RAP
- I'm a new rapper
- tryna channel my pain and anger
- these lyrics are the only way to get it out
- to show people what I'm all about
- a little white girl
- who didn't grow up in the hood
- food on the table every night
- and they claim I've got it good
- but you haven't seen through the white walls that surround me
- the yelling and the screamin
- and the emotional monopoly
- my life seem perfect but it's never been that way
- excess money but still a product of neglect
- my mentality has been wrecked
- by the first mom who left me
- because you can't take a baby to any good party
- the second mom who entered my life like an angel
- and everyone still expects me to be grateful
- but my whole life she's expected perfection
- and told to follow every direction without question
- but once she realized my emotions couldn't be tamed
- she walked out and sent me away
- the whole while my dad showed nothing
- didn't show he cared until I started cutting
- but even then he just wanted me gone
- why should he have to be reminded of what he's done wrong?
- I was taught real young to hate myself and be scared
- of anyone who said they loved you and seemed to care
- because that's never the case
- there's always something hidden behind the words they say
- true love is never selfless
- in fact love is never true
- and in all honestly love is a word that's to often used
- maybe one day
- when I've run far enough away
- I'll find the tranquility
- and I won't have to feel so guilty
DEFENDER'S RAP
- Hook: life can take you out
- Life is full of doubt
- They will hate you now
- This is my show
- Take a bow
- I'm in a wasteland
- I feel damned
- I'm in a wasteland
- Verse: talking about the time I started rap music
- I didn't find it fun I just found it therapeutic
- The rap game is what I executed
- My whole life was polluted with drugs sex and violence
- Because I refused to never stay in silence
- I was a rebel full of fucking defiance
- Because I bottled my emotions
- And I thought talking was a notion
- But Lord
- I'm sick of going through the motions
- I'm high on pills and potions
- I'd much rather be open
- And always having hope man
- This is my way of coping
- (Hook)
- Verse: look In my eyes and see how much it hurts
- To see people walk away that I love
- Man that depression is much worse
- It feels like I'm in the casket in that black hearse
- I'm buried alive all I see is this brown dirt
- And I remember how much you fucked up my life and lied to me
- Just to let you know dad you murdered the hope that was once inside of me
- Fuck you
- A piece of me just died you see
- But my past follows me everywhere I go
- And I've come to learn that this past is cold as snow
- I wanted to let you know
- What the fuck I'm feeling
- These wounds aren't healing
- Your words are not appealing
- (Hook)
- Bridge: just go away
- Away from me
- The voices in my head get away from me
- Cause I remember
- Verse: on the day you left
- It felt like I breathed my last breath
- And now that you're gone I feel like I am close to death
- I try to heal
- But I'm obsessed with flesh
- And the Lord knows that I fucking tried my best
- And I fell down because I have nothing left
- Fuck life man I had no fucking benefits
- I'm death obsessed
- (Hook ×3)