Battles JulesFromDaFiction vs R3LNTL3SS
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- I guess I ain't tripping about the foundation
- I could take you to Uruguay don't mind my station
- Could you admire my thirst and starvation
- Sorry if I wasn't very patient
- Maybe we should take a branco wit the long back seat
- Listening to the radio no on oj on the t.v
- Maybe we should play some different type of ages
- Boys be trying like relate
- But that sex talk really be sounding staged
- I should've told you music was the way to escape my pain
- But your iq worth a grain
- Your auto tune sound so clique
- Producers be all flake
- Can't event send you an email back
- So now you can find me in Uruguay or in the outback
- So don't you ever say Tre didn't ever give you a chance
- Don't make me get wild listening to bas feeling like Hopsin
- Thinking about my first love how I have her chocolates
- Searched her on instagram and them thots at it again
- Need nice place to relate
- Foriegn fornication always rattled my brain
- On the higher learning getting higher taste
- If I become president I'm a mix of Obama Bill Clinton and JFK
- When I was young I ain't have to trip about a poker face
- All she wanted you do was play
- After art sit next to me and my lunch tray
- But now a days
- On her twitter I can tell her thing she say
- Was there on the jungle when you fell
- Wondering if my exs would pay my Bail
- Catching jungle fever to the illness I might have fell
- But it passes and things fail
- On my Daniel Day Lewis I never wish me well
- Such a shame
- Things had be this way
- Never looking at the sun rays
- Never had drunk to express my love
- Hating feeling like a snub
- Pops told me you gotta be tough
- or they Gonna eat ya
- I've been writing for a long time
- And I think I've had. A Enough
DEFENDER'S RAP
- Well I'm here A new year done lost everything That my my heart holds dear
- I'm not ready to lose her, but fuck it she done already switched gears
- gave her heart to another mother fucker and left me in cold tears
- it's 2016 but it doesn't feel like a new year,
- I just keep prayin I find some glasses so I can see things clear
- Most times the faith gets me thru
- but this time the faith has me questioning you,
- I feel like job God
- why must you let the devil take everything to see if my faith stays true
- My love will never fade for you but today my heart turned blue
- and the chill of winter has truly never felt so true
- I send this prayer off not to get answers
- But to ask for the endurance to get thru
- I rather relive the pain of the gutter a million times
- then hit rewind and let the devil torture me like i commited a war crime
- Nothin hurts worst
- than The thought of her giving her love to anotha man
- True loves truly something I'll never understand,
- It's like the moment you think you have It
- your grip slips and it gets ripped from yo hand...