Battles OBlivi vs
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44 bars, story telling.
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- Let me tell you a story of a young man.
- Way back when no one gave a fuck man,
- He was in that kitchen cooking up nutrition,
- Wishin' for tuition but his Intuition left this boy Livin.'
- Through ambition and his inhibition he went on a mission.
- so he started spittin'
- verses that were hot be he needed ignition.
- He needed to grind, but gears were causing Friction.
- he wrote about his life like it was fiction,
- wishin' for a fixing.
- living a life like diction became his addiction.
- Trying to find his recognition,
- working like a tactician,
- cause rapping was his passion.
- in LA not getting any action.
- but he was actually asking,
- for god for help they were chattin'.
- His head hurts so he pops a Aspirin,
- He was trippin' like it was acid.
- His mind is divided like a fraction,
- he just wants to read his lines like its Caption,
- then capture it, this rap game he mastered it.
- It was luicid like he was in luzifers den,
- and he thought he was loosing it.
- but then again,
- he didn't sign his soul but he's writing with a pen
- this left him wondering, when he would make it.
- working that nine to five cooking that bacon.
- fast forward five years and he did it with out satan.
- He was glad god was on his side keeping him straightened.
- He remembers making tracks out of his basement
- all you need to succeed is to have commitment.
- and don't let anyone tell you any different.
- were all fucking gifted.
DEFENDER'S RAP
- Alright so you want a story
- I'll tell you one that ain't so fiction
- Once upon a time I ran into
- This guy who thought he knew the definition
- Of what good rap was
- Naw, he just like all them other ones
- Standard guys that can't flow
- And always talk about they guns
- He wasn't about that kinda rapping
- But his stuff was just as awful
- You trynna be a rapper?
- That sounds like something unlawful
- I've grown up in a war
- My house ain't never peaceful
- I know my biggest threats
- And my attacks are always lethal
- What I have gone through
- Bro, that shouldn't be legal
- The things hold me together
- Are this music and that steeple
- People look in my eyes
- They think that I am evil
- Not something they've seen
- It's like I am medieval
- Check out my castle bro
- You would think I'm a king
- Bet you never seen one before
- That's a cool thing
- Not royalty are you?
- Me neither, I earned all of this
- You couldn't handle anything
- From me, and this wasn't even a full on diss