Battles  Steady vs Exhilarated

RULES

A written about advice in life advice given from your father of father figure that impacted your life in a positive way

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

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DEFENDER'S RAP

  • My old man once told me
  • Yea he sat me down and gave me a story
  • Of him and buddies
  • Rising to the glory!
  • "You know son, this may seem kinda corny"
  • But you shall keep this for your kids
  • When you turn fourty.
  • Always tellin' me to push myself
  • Beyond my highest limits
  • Said "In this game, you gotta be in it to win it"
  • "Okay dad"
  • Im gonna be the King Of The Ring
  • Watch me win this match
  • So you can hear the crowd sing
  • and chant my fuckin name
  • And i swear on my grave
  • Ill bring you with me to the Hall Of Fame
  • Where both of us can let the doubters
  • in the Hall Of Shame
  • Your the only that helped me through my terror and pain
  • So imma pray for you in the lord of vein
  • To keep you alive
  • To keep me sane
  • Cause if you leave this world
  • Imma lose my brain
  • Your the only one thats been by my side
  • Never have to ask if i need a ride..
  • Yea dad, take me with you..
  • I wanna go to heaven
  • Im wishing to see your face again since 11:11

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