Battles  lfajlkds vs REevL108

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

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DEFENDER'S RAP

  • Yeah
  • My lines are filled with concentration
  • For my career's preservation
  • So I can make it
  • By ascending pass what's basic
  • So I my don't fall into attenuation
  • So I try to keep it real
  • Cuz I can't be fake if I'm to be a favourite
  • Cuz when I spit I want you to feel
  • What I'm going through
  • Cuz someone else out there is to
  • And music is a therapeutic way to deal
  • With the truth
  • That few believe in this
  • Cuz they think they know me
  • So they concluded that it's just a dream
  • It makes me pissed
  • That they think I can't achieve
  • Being a successful in music
  • Cuz I'm book smart
  • But that's want makes me sick
  • Look at my art
  • The level of maturity in my lyrics
  • Could hook your heart
  • Cuz I make you relate
  • With my state
  • SO HOW CAN THIS BE A MISTAKE
  • If I'm rade
  • Considering that my career is a infant
  • So dad
  • I can't stay out of this business
  • Not cuz I'm bad
  • But I can't witness
  • Me wasting the opportunity to be grand

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