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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • I feel like I'm trapped in a cage, encapsulated by rage, but I know I can't be honest
  • So I keep my deep rhymes trapped in the page and portray myself as histrionic
  • My conscience feels slapped in the face, but it knows depression's chronic
  • To whom it may concern, I feel transparency's the only tonic
  • To be truthful, I don't know that I should even exist
  • I'm a no-good drug dealer always feeling amiss
  • Who resorts to threatening others, faces feeling my fists
  • And leaves himself reeling after a swing and a miss
  • I claim no one's realer than this, and that I'm married to the rap game
  • But I'd be lying if I claimed I was even stealing a kiss
  • And I claim to have money, but I'm dead broke
  • My own parents wish I was dead, bloke
  • And if I claimed I wished any different
  • You know I'd be lying
  • Because this facade of indifference makes me wish I was dying

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • Hyped as ever, his approach was clever
  • they said his future was bright, but he left it for better
  • opportunities in life; Oh what a demise!
  • You look like a failure, all that promise, just a bunch of lies
  • He looked into her eyes, said "Wait for me, we would stay together
  • and see the rising sun, would love each other forever".
  • Heavy was his heart, but he knew harder will be the road
  • He left her crying, because it was his destiny was on hold.
  • His heart was bleeding, but the eyes remained dry
  • "I'll miss you love, but please go, I dont wana cry"
  • and then he ran away, not even willing to make his head turn
  • He was already feeling weak, he cant let hardwork let it burn
  • HIS PROGRESS, he was desperate for success, yet he pleed
  • "I must not stop, until I succeed
  • She is my heart, and i'm her assassin without the creed"

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