Battles  Vnair vs Ambiguous

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • Put pen to paper
  • Don't know why but every time my mind says later
  • Brain keeps giving orders to me
  • You're right. Yes, I'm nothing more than a fucking waiter
  • But my mental state is devastated
  • Have i stated bout the times I've stayed frustrated
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  • Cos really there's no way that
  • I'll be levitated
  • And put on top of the game
  • Then commemorated
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  • Fuck that
  • I just complicate my lines
  • I can't write a non-nonsense rhyme
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  • Now,
  • Most of y'all gonna judge me
  • Verbally bash and smash me, then insult me
  • But guess what ?
  • It's one way communication and it's me who does the narration.
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  • But let's face it
  • I'm not a famed rapper
  • But I'll get the point straight at ya
  • Cos the point is there's no point in getting ointment
  • Cos your/you're butt-hurt.
  • Your brains disjointed,intertwined,twisted
  • So it won't work
  • It's viral
  • And when it gets worse
  • You now what they do, bitch
  • Right! Go twerk/ G.O.A.T work

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • ME entering the stage, yo, make some spaces
  • throw away the deck, king being slayed by the aces
  • Motherfuckers said I would never hit the bases
  • I said "You're welcome, come take this"
  • Handled the dope, so that I have my places
  • take my world so high, I'll be majesty of the races
  • you still rallying your job, my victory is by serving aces
  • Picture me with my Wimbledon, you still around tying laces
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  • Yeah, stepping up with my game, you cant go fast
  • live this temporary glory, while it lasts
  • Im the engine, but without a control
  • with new RPM, as it shows;
  • seamlessly raising my stock
  • You hustling on streets, I'm "miles away" from my writer's block.
  • Undeniable talent, but patience always the key
  • you look like some random wanabe, like sheep stuck with a flee
  • no talent, you just like suck blood like mosquitoes
  • i aint wasting my time on you,
  • I have had enough like 'ya with nachos and barritos.

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