Battles AdoniS vs Knd
RULES
write a story.( still must rhyme)
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THIS BATTLE IS OVER
Knd won this battle!
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Battle on June 15 2016
CHALLENGER'S RAP
- Monica Luvenski just turned seventeen
- the summer just begun, it was nineteen ninety three
- she loved record shopping uptown for CD's
- One day she was there skimming through a magazine
- when a boy walked through the door, with his boys, group of four
- had an Afro that glistened with the grease picked and all
- jaw then out shines all the bulbs in the store
- he walks over to her with his hand near his draws
- 'sup B, I'm digging you. would love to know you more'
- 'Um... How about a date?', ' Great! tomorrow at four'
- he drove her out to Pio Pio up in east New York
- After eating dinner Monnie bites her silver fork
- the boy grabs the tab, has his last scrap of pork
- he takes her to his place they make they're way above the porch
- they get down to business, his hands around her biscuits,
- his penis penetrating smearing semen on her lipstick
- after sex he take her home, then he kissed her on the head
- returns, and grabs Zs while he sleeps in his bed
- he never called her back and, a couple months pass
- when his sack attached warts, and his penis had scabs
- he told his mom about it, then the boy got smacked
- "what the hell Richard!" he could tell that she was mad
- she dialed 911 with the wire still attached,
- called a taxi then they drove to booth in the cab
- A few weeks forward rick was strolling on his block
- an SUV rolled up and fired seven shots
- two bullets hit his chest as he fell on to the ground
- the van sped away as the ambulance was sound
- but the day he got smacked monnie also told her dad
- that her tongue hung in pain with an everlasting rash
- He was mad so he drove for a while in rage
- until he saw the punk that owed him fifty dollars and change
- he started running when he noticed that he was being tailed
- so he hit the gas harder when the punk set feet for sail
- he capped the ride twice then went sprinting up his street
- a van pulled up after words triggered from his heat
- her dad drove off before the cops could reach the scene
- because he was already surrounded by the feds two cars or three
- placed under arrest, trial started after time
- he got a phone call saying Monica died.
- Monica's dad, had an affair with ricks mom
- the nurse that called him up and also told him she was gone
- she talked about they're time together "when she worked for me.."
- she'd clean up everything no matter what, very sweet
- never once had she seemed unhealthy or in pain
- i guess she should've wore glove when cleaning up the place
- this is one way, that anyone could get HIV,
- use condoms, use your head, be safe and stay clean
DEFENDER'S RAP
- (Verse 1)
- Yea for life by my side
- Ride or die knowin wrong from right
- Still some stupid shit from day to night
- Stealin stuff started of light
- Missing no trespassing signs
- But as it grows to bigger things and fines
- To anything we find don't wait in line
- The park gots graffiti on the slides
- All through lenox silver on every sign
- Family dollar to dollar general with broken
- Alarms we came from the park
- They're familiar with us open shit and take it
- We're gonna be famous with our tags big
- We keep our mouth shut our tags say shit
- I took all that so that I can lay it
- prayin all the time we really need jesus to make it
- Opportunist any chance we take it
- None of this was a lie I do know for life
- This nigga by my side ride or die
- (Verse 2)
- Always the best of our class don't like it kiss our ass
- We just sit back and laugh at the facts around us
- Cant say we don't cuss far from it
- You know that we love it, just havin fun an
- Doin what we want I mean we're young, damn
- Encounters with the cops
- Told em we'd give them a donut they let us off
- They wanted to talk to us we say better ask our parents first
- I'm puttin more humor in this then the last verse
- Yea we find an easy way around everything
- During class you remember math we weren't doing the right thing
- We were supposed to be writing
- But we didn't and we covered it
- Got the right answer different method sane affect bitch
- Got caught flicking off a girl in math
- She was mad everybody else laughed
- We don't stay up and cry we just stay by each other's side
- This is no lie bros for life ride or die