Battles  AdoniS vs Knd

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Battle on June 15 2016

CHALLENGER'S RAP

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  • Monica Luvenski just turned seventeen
  • the summer just begun, it was nineteen ninety three
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  • she loved record shopping uptown for CD's
  • One day she was there skimming through a magazine
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  • when a boy walked through the door, with his boys, group of four
  • had an Afro that glistened with the grease picked and all
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  • jaw then out shines all the bulbs in the store
  • he walks over to her with his hand near his draws
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  • 'sup B, I'm digging you. would love to know you more'
  • 'Um... How about a date?', ' Great! tomorrow at four'
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  • he drove her out to Pio Pio up in east New York
  • After eating dinner Monnie bites her silver fork
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  • the boy grabs the tab, has his last scrap of pork
  • he takes her to his place they make they're way above the porch
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  • they get down to business, his hands around her biscuits,
  • his penis penetrating smearing semen on her lipstick
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  • after sex he take her home, then he kissed her on the head
  • returns, and grabs Zs while he sleeps in his bed
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  • he never called her back and, a couple months pass
  • when his sack attached warts, and his penis had scabs
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  • he told his mom about it, then the boy got smacked
  • "what the hell Richard!" he could tell that she was mad
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  • she dialed 911 with the wire still attached,
  • called a taxi then they drove to booth in the cab
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  • A few weeks forward rick was strolling on his block
  • an SUV rolled up and fired seven shots
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  • two bullets hit his chest as he fell on to the ground
  • the van sped away as the ambulance was sound
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  • but the day he got smacked monnie also told her dad
  • that her tongue hung in pain with an everlasting rash
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  • He was mad so he drove for a while in rage
  • until he saw the punk that owed him fifty dollars and change
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  • he started running when he noticed that he was being tailed
  • so he hit the gas harder when the punk set feet for sail
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  • he capped the ride twice then went sprinting up his street
  • a van pulled up after words triggered from his heat
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  • her dad drove off before the cops could reach the scene
  • because he was already surrounded by the feds two cars or three
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  • placed under arrest, trial started after time
  • he got a phone call saying Monica died.
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  • Monica's dad, had an affair with ricks mom
  • the nurse that called him up and also told him she was gone
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  • she talked about they're time together "when she worked for me.."
  • she'd clean up everything no matter what, very sweet
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  • never once had she seemed unhealthy or in pain
  • i guess she should've wore glove when cleaning up the place
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  • this is one way, that anyone could get HIV,
  • use condoms, use your head, be safe and stay clean

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • (Verse 1)
  • Yea for life by my side
  • Ride or die knowin wrong from right
  • Still some stupid shit from day to night
  • Stealin stuff started of light
  • Missing no trespassing signs
  • But as it grows to bigger things and fines
  • To anything we find don't wait in line
  • The park gots graffiti on the slides
  • All through lenox silver on every sign
  • Family dollar to dollar general with broken
  • Alarms we came from the park
  • They're familiar with us open shit and take it
  • We're gonna be famous with our tags big
  • We keep our mouth shut our tags say shit
  • I took all that so that I can lay it
  • prayin all the time we really need jesus to make it
  • Opportunist any chance we take it
  • None of this was a lie I do know for life
  • This nigga by my side ride or die
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  • (Verse 2)
  • Always the best of our class don't like it kiss our ass
  • We just sit back and laugh at the facts around us
  • Cant say we don't cuss far from it
  • You know that we love it, just havin fun an
  • Doin what we want I mean we're young, damn
  • Encounters with the cops
  • Told em we'd give them a donut they let us off
  • They wanted to talk to us we say better ask our parents first
  • I'm puttin more humor in this then the last verse
  • Yea we find an easy way around everything
  • During class you remember math we weren't doing the right thing
  • We were supposed to be writing
  • But we didn't and we covered it
  • Got the right answer different method sane affect bitch
  • Got caught flicking off a girl in math
  • She was mad everybody else laughed
  • We don't stay up and cry we just stay by each other's side
  • This is no lie bros for life ride or die

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