Battles  SmokeOne vs RazorV

RULES

No rules. Say whatever

Max of 29 lines

THIS BATTLE IS OVER

RazorV won this battle!

2 ROUNDS

View other rounds...
Battle on June 17 2014

CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • Now Razor V, why you always hatin on me
  • Is it cos ill burn holes in ya telepathic and verbally,
  • Wait and see, im coming out with a tazor
  • And nested on top, is a red dotted lazer.
  • Ima amaze ya with my sick rap and diverse flows,
  • Ima beast on the mic acting like you didnt know
  • The rap battle is taking place but you didnt show,
  • So I stuck around for a bit, ended up fucking your hoe.
  • Ready to blow, angry like a pissed off tortoise
  • Cock so big the shit hangs like a walrus.
  • Unlike you ya piss ant,
  • Battling you aint even got me amped,
  • Step to me again and you bound to be stamped.
  • Crossed out like a crossword battling me's obserd,
  • Ya name dullin out till it cant be heard.
  • Youve let the animal out the cage, and im stuck in a rage,
  • You shoulda stopped and listened before clickin my page.
  • Oh shit, things are about to get hectik,
  • Got this clown razorV rappin like his dyslexic
  • Its hysteric to a few think ive made my point of view
  • Lyrics stuck so fuckin quick you'd think im made of glue.
  • Now go on shoo, before I leave you blackened and bruised
  • Slapped down your head got the imprint of the bottom of my shoe 
  • Youve been owned and shot down by the top gun.
  • Have fun being rattled by Smoke-One!!!

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • Now SmokeOne,why do you think I'm always hating ? ,
  • Is it,cuz I asked you a question and you overreacted,that's hating ? ,
  • Okay I'll wait,but won't see shit,you're equiped ,
  • with a tazor,yo dawg,is that it, ? ,
  • Is that all you'll bring,that aint shit ,
  • My name is RazorV,but I don't carry a razor ,
  • I come with a machete,two straps,a heavy machine gun and a RPG ,
  • to blow out you and your lil tazor...,why can't you see ? ,
  • That you're not all that amazing,your rap is sick ,
  • but your flow is weak,it needs more work,to be tight as a brick ,
  • You're to quick to talk,cuz I did show,not an entartainer,like you,but I'll show ,
  • some of my level,cuz I won't give you the bliss ,
  • I won't bring it down,so I can make it to a diss , /that's hating !
  • You're stuck up,that's why you won't even be approached,by my hoe !
  • Yeah,I know you're ready to blow,you're just like your mother,oh ,
  • In this battle I'm running around you,like B-Rabbit,I agree,that you're slow ,
  • like a tortoise,but you know,what they say,about cock-talkers,ay ?
  • I must agree,that your shit hangs,but its cuz I hanged it up ,
  • I aint amped too,but I did step up,I don't see a stamp up ,
  • Like Allen I,it is I,who crossed you,with the crossover ,
  • yeah,my name can't be heard,cuz nobody wants their ass,handed over ,
  • I've let the hater,out of his cage,so he can be stuck up,with rage ,
  • you shoulda stopped and took the time,to view my page ,
  • I won't get owned by your circus of a rap,cuz I won't be a clown /ask Trife !
  • Oh shit, things didn't got hectik,but I left you hectic !

Cookin' something up, just wait a sec...