Battles  Deezy vs StillAlive48

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29 Lines, write about your experience with the devil or hell

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

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DEFENDER'S RAP

  • it burns beneath my skin, the flames look so thin, i go to take a look at myself,
  • but all i see is sins floating through the air, im scared, so i close my eyes in
  • disgust, but when i open them all i saw was dust, as it cleared up i started
  • to tear up, as i looked around i saw that i was being cooked on a stick,
  • these fucking demons are stick, as the cry's of mercy left my mouth,
  • i started to have doubts, i shut my eyes and screamed out,
  • IS THIS ALL JUST A DREAM?, as my eyes swung open i saw a woven rope
  • in front of me, as i look ahead i saw that i was being lead, i tried to fight
  • for my life, but then i realized i'd have to pay the ultimate price,
  • as the darkness closes in,
  • the frown on my face turns to a grin,
  • as my body starts to burn my heart fills with sins,
  • im tired, i know ima lost soul, its my fault i believed what i've been told,
  • but its the part of me that feels this way, the part of me that told me it would be
  • ok, the demon inside me who thinks he runs my life when im weak,
  • here lets take a sneak peak,look at my arms and body,
  • it proves that there are some battles that cant be won,
  • i dont want to burn in hell over the way i think, no i want to go to heaven knowing
  • i'll be ok and i wont sink, theres another part of me that keeps saying, dont give up
  • just keep praying, i know its hard to fight when you think your alone, but hey
  • your not alone i have your back even when your bones clasp,

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