Battles  MakkOfficial vs Ivos

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

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  • because I just wanna get a couple things off of my mind man/
  • telling god like im death, I need a sign man/
  • im just tryna change with the times man/
  • how many times wanna be a nice man/
  • (but it just aint no use)
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  • they say you snooze you lose man I snoozed she got away/
  • what a day, hopefully that chance comes another day/
  • 'cause right now im feeling, finna run away/
  • Uber to the airport pick a runway, go on a flight one way/
  • who cares where im going as long as it lands?
  • holding hands with the devil while im tryna pray to my with the other like/
  • (but it just aint no use)
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  • its crazy the way we have evolved/
  • looking at the gangsters, came a long way from wanting to be those/
  • out the thorns, we rose/
  • now when I write a track I know it's not about reloads/
  • not everyday hype man, sometimes sit back and talk about your life man/
  • 'cause not everyday be a big man/
  • sometimes let your guard down and realise we wanna be kids man/
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  • now we just kids having kids man/
  • dead poor tryna live man forgive man/
  • i'll give man my last penny, in my rass wallet/
  • if he asks for it, not wanting any/
  • thing in return, let the weed burn/
  • let the thoughts flow beat got me tapping like morse code/
  • looking since two zero nought O/
  • (but it just aint no use)
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  • so allow the weed to go through me/
  • how will I find the girl of my dreams? I never do sleep/
  • I mean I do sleep but I use terms loosely I mean I close one eye
  • every now and then to power nap/
  • did ish now I rap, now in fact/
  • I've got a business but that not your business/
  • ive always been intriguing people intrigued with this/
  • people intrigued by me what is this?/
  • why me? im just guy from the gutter/
  • butters with a fucked up nut a nutter/
  • but now im in a packed room, and feel alone/
  • home sick when I thought that I was sick home/
  • sick of them snakes, the further you are from the bottom/
  • the more they wanna see you back there/
  • the faster your going the more they wanna cut your breaks/
  • the more your adding the more they wanna take you away but hay/
  • the people I grew up with don't exist/
  • I don't remember them but then again Eminem and too many men/
  • was all I was focusing on, school wasn't important to me/
  • I thought a degree would help me be the all I can be/
  • but all a degree to me was two weeks of partying before I dropped out/
  • now I do me, more better than them
  • i'm better than any competitor or veteran/
  • have you seen me? stuck in this web like a fly but all I need is a queen bee/
  • like beyonce or riri, I need her to help me to be me/
  • so beem me up scotty, looking for the right girl/
  • maybe black maybe white girl maybe mixed but///
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  • but it just aint no use

DEFENDER'S RAP

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  • 3 Hermanos
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  • Verse 1
  • 3 young cats all wanted to be lions,
  • if I said they had it all man I'll be lying,
  • fighting for survival like the Aztecs and Mayans. grew up with the rats and roaches ain't no hiding, nothing else to do but to put their time in.
  • Crying then drying then crying again,
  • sports kept them close soccer stars was the plan, no money for uniforms the state pen is where the money went.
  • Bailing poppa out another dui there goes another grand.
  • Shh he's home kids please don't make him mad, they hurry off downstairs youngest scribbles in his pad.
  • The oldest's mind races-he's quick to use his head,
  • the middle one was anxious to make some quick bread,
  • the youngest was the strangest always did Wat Simon said.
  • They made a pact that one day one will take them out their dread.
  • Hook
  • 3 different outcomes same come up
  • (Repeat 3 times)
  • Chorus
  • Fell from the same tree ate the fruit of moms labor, 3 kids turned to men cz dad was a failure. That emptyness at at home it was bigger then crators, neighbors refused to help out gave no favors.
  • Hook
  • 3 different outcomes same come up.
  • (Repeat 3 times)
  • Verse 2
  • Fast foward several obstacles and years passed, that old useless man came back to being dad,
  • but there still was a hole they remembered their pack,
  • making paper stack no room to slack,
  • lack of females na they had good looks,
  • the problem was a future away from the hood,
  • like most with the options they hit books,
  • the oldest was determined to motivate his rooks, he pushed and pushed but school ain't click so they hit the boot,
  • the middle one slanged ain't bang ain't shoot, studio time ain't cheap So youngest turned crook, into crooked politics the oldest he got hooked, Helping momma out in any way they could,
  • like you or any good son would, yeah it wasn't legal so! they ain't legal but still United they stood.
  • Hook
  • 3 different out comes same come up
  • (Repeat 3 times)
  • Chorus
  • Fell from the same tree ate the fruit of moms labor, 3 kids turned to men cz dad was a failure. That emptyness at at home it was bigger then crators, neighbors refused to help out gave no favors.
  • Verse 3
  • So there you go a story bout 3 kids in a basement, below average was there original placement,
  • now you can go n fuck those observations,
  • made ya change ya point of views like an airplanes elevation,
  • enraged self engage can't sit around and mope, get it by any means mans code,
  • forever known, A king pin to the world to his people he's the pope,
  • green light from a brother buying people's votes, their sibling stealing from the Rich and rapping about hope,
  • judge if you want just another knot in the rope.
  • in n out with a comet like twain their fame only grows. 3 bros.
  • Hook
  • 3 different outcomes same come up
  • (Repeat 5 times)

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