Battles StillAlive48 vs Carla
RULES
a story about someone you knew it can be happy or sad
Max of 29 lines
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- you see i once knew this boy his name was mike mc'cory,
- he was a happy little boy till the day that it all fell,
- his brother la'mare had just died from suicide,
- mike was so confused he didnt know what to do,
- his father wanted nothing to do with him so he was alone,
- out there on his own, no one liked mike because he was different,
- so one day in class mike was called gay by some kid named rj,
- later that day mike was sitting on his bed his mom tried putting her hand
- right beside his head, but with every touch he would still resits then she see's
- the scars that buried deep within his writs, she started to plead and ask him why he said
- this way he has control of things he feels inside, his mother said how long have
- you been doing this cause you got me here feeling so dang helpless,
- two months later after the death of la'mare mike finds himself sitting here starring
- at the stars, he feels hopeless sitting here alone so he beside to start heading home,
- as he layed down in his bed he starts to think of all the good times in his head,
- but then he felt a hand on his shoulder he looks over, tears fall down his face as he said
- la'mare, his brother said hang in there my little solider things will get better believe me
- im your guardian angel im not going anywhere, i staying here now till the day you
- die, but that better not be from suicide, he said looking down at his puzzled bother
- sitting there in his bed,
DEFENDER'S RAP
- my style is inconceivable the reason for ur death
- ur feeble attempts makes me want to stab ur flesh
- take that first step, slice ur neck and then i fled
- call nine-one-one, cuz i left your head for the feds
- to figure out, that im the biggest terror intellect
- my lyrics are mistaken for national security bomb threats,
- get on point, my venom is in the water ur drinkin
- thats why your manhood is burning when your pissin
- dismiss the fiction the fact is u should listen to this,
- i have more hunger for writin than starvin dyslexic kids
- dont give 2 sh*ts u spit like a b*tch with 2 d*cks under her clit
- i rip the mic ur shocked from my inmeasurable strikes
- i murder you twice, ur physical and ur spiritual life