Battles -BMak vs user382115941
RULES
No dissing. Freestyle to tupac until the end of time instrumental.
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- (Start at 22 sec.)
- (Come on)
- (Verse 1) Perhaps I have become a duplicate of Pops.
- To be half the Man he is you gotta give me props.
- Assuring this my finest work above them all tops.
- Perfect is the LORDS' Only HIS it never Stops.
- I'm striving for success in this mess tied in knots.
- I feel blessed to have food clothes and clean pots.
- A pot a piss and tub to wash a bed to lay my head.
- Working through a temp just to make a little bread.
- Complained instead of being thankful for another breath.
- Yes the air's polluted , but I haven't seen death.
- So I gotta LIVE until haven't nothing left.
- Before I die I wanna leave with burdenz off my chest.
- I'm wise enough to know this is all just a test.
- The truth will set me free so I give you NO LIES.
- If you could see my passion for this music in the eyez.
- Then you will see my life In every word, every rhyme.
- ( until the End of Time)
- ( Hook)
- (Verse 2) Dear LORD Forgive me for my life of sin.
- I've fallen short of worthiness from thee so have my kin.
- We ain't saints nor criminals, but some been in the pin.
- Quite a few been in the streets I'm different from all them.
- Sheltered as a child grew up right inside the house.
- Afraid of worldly dangers doubts of having me a spouse.
- In this small world still I felt the size of mouses.
- Eliminating fears getting older as I douse em.
- Insecure child inside this timid shy man.
- Found my confidence to speak to women 2010.
- A year later broken hearted by a string of flings.
- Inspired me to write poetry, RAP and sing.
- Fast forward two years when it really matters.
- I knew she was the one finally I broke the pattern.
- Started Dating Casually became something serious.
- That time I pondered time for us was getting kinda curious.
- (Until The End of Time)
- (Hook)
- (Verse 3) Now whose to say if I was right or wrong.
- To try to start a fight because a guy flirts along.
- I wasn't have it I snapped I checked em at her job.
- In front of everyone, I exposed this old blob.
- Jealously began consuming I was in so love.
- I've toned it down a bit, she wants me to be a dove.
- Even though I'm stubborn she wants marriage and some kids.
- Whether I be ready when it happens wat it is.
- I've got to find a way to make a six figure pay.
- Bills upon us worried mind night work in the day.
- Maybe I will finally become a famous Artist.
- Or graduate from college get a Ill degree the smartest.
- Follow up with melodies when I start to record.
- Channeling some Kendrick, Eminem, Tupac Shakur.
- Add a lil something new the world has never heard.
- Embrace a blessing possible from GOD that could occur.
- ( Until The End of Time)
- (Hook)
- (Special)
- Until the End of My Time
DEFENDER'S RAP
- I spit the hottest shit you cant follow it and I lock you in a prison full of
- costume freaks, then I knock you in the head before you can fool them and
- can copy me with that copy shit, I lit a fire with my thoughts like a fire
- breathin dragon that caused more lives to be lost than genocidal moth eaten
- ten feet three inches dogs with sharp claws, I slap bitches with my bad hand
- and you stand there and there and take it like a care bear, I'm a analytical
- cannibal made of minerals standin call me literal whet I beat you it'll be
- pitiful, I stand with blisters in blizzards sicknin my vision and makin me
- lose quickness like bitches disrespectin me with quick shit, I'm quick enough
- to kick ya and never miss ya when I diss ya and piss on ya while I whistle
- then fuck your old mistress, you can laugh at me when you know ya
- lackin that cracklin anatomy that real mcees make when rappin and battlen
- catastrophes, I been a genius since poppin and lockin in toxic as a fetus,
- dodging, blockin and knockin till you aint breathen, these bitches aint ready
- for the truth, they lose, the proof is too much for them cruise and move
- through, It explodes in there face like some overcooked ramen, I bomb the
- bombers with colder looked toxins, I get crazy like a pet owner with sweat
- on her left shoulder that has the same shade as her tears cause the
- blood from her pet comes from ten boulders, I bet my rhymes are colder
- than jet loaners dropping bombs on net sewers, yo ass is trash, I crash and
- smash an axe through ya scab that's stabbed.