Battles  TJFELTZ vs BAD_IDEA

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

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  • Heartbeat benieth as unholy life starts to cease
  • Screams not reached on deaf ears unwilling to feast
  • Fingertips bleed as scratching proceed
  • Adrenaline intercede as you give God your final plea
  • Sounds from above as earth is shove
  • Shivers fly over like a sacred dove
  • Then silence forcomes from a deathly hush
  • As darkness surrounds like a oil painted brush
  • Thoughts of mistakes as fear overtakes
  • Eyes wide open, your sleeping awake
  • Gasping for breath as you start to confess
  • But I put you to rest and now your just death

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • In every storm she'll not be quelled
  • In parking lots that mortars shelled
  • In dusty cots that gasses filled
  • That left the the babe inside so still
  • The heart filled pain when mothers mourn
  • Her brightest suns undone and torn
  • Her youngest ones some were not born
  • Her husband taken 'fore the dawn
  • Whose eyes wept dry so dead and cold
  • Inside a fire rises bold
  • She'll not be quelled she shall not fold
  • Til lies dispelled and stories told
  • Of whose blood was our glory, gold
  • Oil and freedom reaped and sold?

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